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WhiteDragon · #1 09-04-2009, 04:10 AM

Might as well go along with the other threads...

I made this a few months ago, just decided I'd post it here:

I screwed up on the head but I couldn't figure out how the hell to fix it.
I fixed that weird orange blob before I printed it.

Some other random stuff I've made:

A WAY long time ago when I did all that signature stuff:

SwimChao · #2 09-04-2009, 04:17 AM

Just out of curiosity, is he wearing his pants backwards? Not trying to sound critical or anything.

When I was looking at it, I first thought it was a back view of the two holding hands and looking forward. When I scrolled down, though, it changed. The guy's body flipped around entirely!

WhiteDragon · #3 09-04-2009, 04:20 AM

I messed up on the head and made some weird illusion... I don't actually know anyone who draws either so I couldn't ask for any help. :P

It works without the girl there, but when she is there you assume that he's facing the same direction and it gets all messed up.

SwimChao · #4 09-04-2009, 04:21 AM

If you're still working on it, we could fix it up. It's not that hard of a transition!

However, if it's old it's no problem and understandable.

doyouskate · #5 09-04-2009, 04:23 AM

reminds me of eureka seven, or is that what you're going for?

WhiteDragon · #6 09-04-2009, 04:23 AM

Already printed it, so I don't feel like changing it.

But just wondering, what exactly is the problem?

WhiteDragon · #7 09-04-2009, 04:24 AM

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Originally Posted by doyouskate

reminds me of eureka seven, or is that what you're going for?

Yep, that's what it was based off of. I wanted a poster of it. ;p

SwimChao · #8 09-04-2009, 04:28 AM

Well, in my opinion to fix the image you'd have to do one of two things.

If your male character is supposed to be facing the same direction of your female, you're going to have to adjust the angle, or general position of the male's head. I perceive the way you handled it as he's either looking off to the side, or somewhat forward. I personally would turn the head a bit more so more of the face is showing. I'm not sure how you intend him to look, so I'm just assuming right now. (Difficult to convey this with words)

If he's supposed to be facing the same direction as the girl, you'll have to realign the body. Though, I'm assuming that isn't the case.

doyouskate · #9 09-04-2009, 04:28 AM

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Originally Posted by WhiteDragon

Yep, that's what it was based off of. I wanted a poster of it. ;p

I like it. Besides the head part, should have given her shorter hair and wings lol. Just sayin.

LordSquirt · #10 09-04-2009, 04:32 AM

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Originally Posted by SwimChao

Just out of curiosity, is he wearing his pants backwards? Not trying to sound critical or anything.

When I was looking at it, I first thought it was a back view of the two holding hands and looking forward. When I scrolled down, though, it changed. The guy's body flipped around entirely!

I thought the same thing, but didn't notice it till you posted it. I thought it was the backview, but the pants show it's actually the front.

WhiteDragon · #11 09-04-2009, 04:33 AM

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Originally Posted by SwimChao

Well, in my opinion to fix the image you'd have to do one of two things.

If your male character is supposed to be facing the same direction of your female, you're going to have to adjust the angle, or general position of the male's head. I perceive the way you handled it as he's either looking off to the side, or somewhat forward. I personally would turn the head a bit more so more of the face is showing. I'm not sure how you intend him to look, so I'm just assuming right now. (Difficult to convey this with words)

If he's supposed to be facing the same direction as the girl, you'll have to realign the body. Though, I'm assuming that isn't the case.

The male character is suppose to be looking to his left, but even further past the girl, not at her.

It's possible to bend your head that far easy in real life, so I think I just drew one line at the wrong angle or something and I couldn't figure out which one. D:

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Originally Posted by doyouskate

I like it. Besides the head part, should have given her shorter hair and wings lol. Just sayin.

It was based off of a scene in the movie (which was released very recently). If you haven't seen it you should. ;D

SwimChao · #12 09-04-2009, 04:40 AM

Yeah, I think with just some small head definition changes it could look just fine.

Crono · #13 09-04-2009, 01:57 PM

Hand looks quite bad, the guys' head looks good and all but it's perspective is wrong. Bottom of the girl's hair looks weird, apart from that I like it. p.s didn't kno you were persian

anubis_wing · #14 09-04-2009, 03:56 PM

Just design the back of the pants and "voila" you have a correct looking fellow.

Also, change the hands. Not only are they looking quite largely deformed, they're facing the wrong way as well. It'd make more sense if they were both looking away.

Elk · #15 09-04-2009, 04:43 PM

Cool anime stuff! Looks pretty Mog-ish