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WhiteDragon 09-04-2009 04:10 AM

Random Stuff
 
Might as well go along with the other threads...


I made this a few months ago, just decided I'd post it here:
http://althack.org/e7-3.png
I screwed up on the head but I couldn't figure out how the hell to fix it.
I fixed that weird orange blob before I printed it.

Some other random stuff I've made:
http://althack.org/new_design2.png
A WAY long time ago when I did all that signature stuff:

http://darius-mediaserver.dreamhosters.com/burn.png

http://darius-mediaserver.dreamhosters.com/death.png

SwimChao 09-04-2009 04:17 AM

Just out of curiosity, is he wearing his pants backwards? Not trying to sound critical or anything.

When I was looking at it, I first thought it was a back view of the two holding hands and looking forward. When I scrolled down, though, it changed. The guy's body flipped around entirely!

WhiteDragon 09-04-2009 04:20 AM

I messed up on the head and made some weird illusion... I don't actually know anyone who draws either so I couldn't ask for any help. :P

It works without the girl there, but when she is there you assume that he's facing the same direction and it gets all messed up.

SwimChao 09-04-2009 04:21 AM

If you're still working on it, we could fix it up. It's not that hard of a transition!

However, if it's old it's no problem and understandable.

doyouskate 09-04-2009 04:23 AM

reminds me of eureka seven, or is that what you're going for?

WhiteDragon 09-04-2009 04:23 AM

Already printed it, so I don't feel like changing it. :D But just wondering, what exactly is the problem?

WhiteDragon 09-04-2009 04:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by doyouskate (Post 1520951)
reminds me of eureka seven, or is that what you're going for?

Yep, that's what it was based off of. I wanted a poster of it. ;p

SwimChao 09-04-2009 04:28 AM

Well, in my opinion to fix the image you'd have to do one of two things.

If your male character is supposed to be facing the same direction of your female, you're going to have to adjust the angle, or general position of the male's head. I perceive the way you handled it as he's either looking off to the side, or somewhat forward. I personally would turn the head a bit more so more of the face is showing. I'm not sure how you intend him to look, so I'm just assuming right now. (Difficult to convey this with words)

If he's supposed to be facing the same direction as the girl, you'll have to realign the body. Though, I'm assuming that isn't the case.

doyouskate 09-04-2009 04:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by WhiteDragon (Post 1520953)
Yep, that's what it was based off of. I wanted a poster of it. ;p

I like it. Besides the head part, should have given her shorter hair and wings lol. Just sayin.

LordSquirt 09-04-2009 04:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SwimChao (Post 1520947)
Just out of curiosity, is he wearing his pants backwards? Not trying to sound critical or anything.

When I was looking at it, I first thought it was a back view of the two holding hands and looking forward. When I scrolled down, though, it changed. The guy's body flipped around entirely!

I thought the same thing, but didn't notice it till you posted it. I thought it was the backview, but the pants show it's actually the front.

WhiteDragon 09-04-2009 04:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SwimChao (Post 1520956)
Well, in my opinion to fix the image you'd have to do one of two things.

If your male character is supposed to be facing the same direction of your female, you're going to have to adjust the angle, or general position of the male's head. I perceive the way you handled it as he's either looking off to the side, or somewhat forward. I personally would turn the head a bit more so more of the face is showing. I'm not sure how you intend him to look, so I'm just assuming right now. (Difficult to convey this with words)

If he's supposed to be facing the same direction as the girl, you'll have to realign the body. Though, I'm assuming that isn't the case.

The male character is suppose to be looking to his left, but even further past the girl, not at her.

It's possible to bend your head that far easy in real life, so I think I just drew one line at the wrong angle or something and I couldn't figure out which one. D:


Quote:

Originally Posted by doyouskate (Post 1520957)
I like it. Besides the head part, should have given her shorter hair and wings lol. Just sayin.

It was based off of a scene in the movie (which was released very recently). If you haven't seen it you should. ;D

SwimChao 09-04-2009 04:40 AM

Yeah, I think with just some small head definition changes it could look just fine.

Crono 09-04-2009 01:57 PM

Hand looks quite bad, the guys' head looks good and all but it's perspective is wrong. Bottom of the girl's hair looks weird, apart from that I like it. p.s didn't kno you were persian

anubis_wing 09-04-2009 03:56 PM

Just design the back of the pants and "voila" you have a correct looking fellow.

Also, change the hands. Not only are they looking quite largely deformed, they're facing the wrong way as well. It'd make more sense if they were both looking away.

Elk 09-04-2009 04:43 PM

Cool anime stuff! Looks pretty Mog-ish


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