1st inside house

vampireslayer · #1 07-05-2008, 02:10 PM

this is my 1st made inside level/map

what ya ppl think about it?

cbk1994 · #2 07-05-2008, 02:32 PM

Not very good ... 1/10.

I don't like that floor at all; try using some of the other tiles, not just the ones that tile like that.

The walls are quite horrid in my opinion; I prefer the newer style of walls (which shows the up/down but not the side)

You have something around the one door but not the others. You have too many plates on the table and the ones on the sides are running off causing a tile error.

You have a bathtub next to a bar ... ?

The pot should be removed or at least moved so it is not overlapped with the barrels.

Also maybe add a door to cover the door holes so they don't look so bad.

vampireslayer · #3 07-05-2008, 03:01 PM

is this better?

Darlene159 · #4 07-05-2008, 03:19 PM

Not bad for a first level, but there are a lot of errors in the walls.

vampireslayer · #5 07-05-2008, 03:27 PM

how is this?
i fixed the errors in the walls, i hope

and i put some kind of carpet on the ground.

cbk1994 · #6 07-05-2008, 03:38 PM

Try working on what I said ... also try floors which aren't patterns.

vampireslayer · #7 07-05-2008, 04:01 PM

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Originally Posted by cbk1994

Try working on what I said ... also try floors which aren't patterns.

you mean this?
i used some without pattern too.

Elizabeth · #8 07-05-2008, 04:28 PM

it doesnt look very original.

Crow · #9 07-05-2008, 05:05 PM

I somehow really, really like this. Especially the walls, they are so creative, and something not seen before (at least I dont know any levels using walls like those). I also prefered the kitchen floor you used in the first few versions. But there are still some errors here and there.

Elizabeth · #10 07-05-2008, 05:10 PM

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Originally Posted by cbk1994

You have a bathtub next to a bar ... ?

..thats a sink

cbk1994 · #11 07-05-2008, 05:35 PM

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Originally Posted by Elizabeth

..thats a sink

That's one badass sink.

DustyPorViva · #12 07-05-2008, 07:13 PM

Actually that's a stove

Darlene159 · #13 07-05-2008, 07:49 PM

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Originally Posted by DustyPorViva

Actually that's a stove

They are talking about the first screeny. The thing with the water in it.

To me, it looks like one of those things you keep water in for farm animals outside.

Tigairius · #14 07-05-2008, 08:09 PM

I like the first one the best, something about it I really like

Crono · #15 07-05-2008, 09:08 PM

Looks oldskool.

I like the overall appearance of the inside, but theres a lot of "errors" with the tiling. For a first inside level it's pretty good though.