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Old 08-01-2007, 01:50 AM
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My first level :P

First attempt at making an outside level.


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Old 08-01-2007, 02:27 AM
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is it a field house?
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Old 08-01-2007, 02:31 AM
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is it a field house?
I dunno, I just made it D:
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Old 08-01-2007, 02:37 AM
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lol it looks so.....greeeeeeeeeeeeeeen.!
no...just a tip..try to add some more natural things along with it.
like a bit of trees ..a little river streaming next to the large house.
try to work with paths aswell.
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Old 08-01-2007, 04:20 AM
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lol it looks so.....greeeeeeeeeeeeeeen.!
no...just a tip..try to add some more natural things along with it.
like a bit of trees ..a little river streaming next to the large house.
try to work with paths aswell.
Ah, alright. I'll give it a little addd on tommorow with some of that stuff :o
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Old 08-01-2007, 05:23 PM
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Lol erm.. what can I say

Detail is kinda overused and extremely random. House thing is ugly.. wtf are those chairs doing lol? Good first attempt I guess

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Old 08-01-2007, 05:47 PM
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LOL that is the coolest level ever and I think if I had a server, I'd make you head LAT. Your judgment is truly awesome and that building is probably the greatest Graal creations in the world. Keep up the good work!

PS I'm serious 100% don't change it a bit, except maybe to add more.
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Old 08-01-2007, 05:56 PM
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You need to learn how to detail and the basics. Keep practicing, you'll get it.

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PS I'm serious 100% don't change it a bit, except maybe to add more.
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Old 08-01-2007, 06:06 PM
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We all start somewhere I remember my first level. It was named new6 and It had houses stacked on top of each other with almost no detail.
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Old 08-01-2007, 06:18 PM
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Dude he's got his own awesome style, why oppress that?
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Old 08-01-2007, 06:19 PM
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Speaking of first levels, this was my very first outside level from late 2000/early 2001 hehe.

http://forums.graalonline.com/forums...2&d=1076848250

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Dude he's got his own awesome style, why oppress that?
I'm not "oppressing" his stlye.
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Old 08-01-2007, 07:53 PM
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Speaking of first levels, this was my very first outside level from late 2000/early 2001 hehe.

http://forums.graalonline.com/forums...2&d=1076848250
Thats not even that bad lol
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Old 08-01-2007, 08:58 PM
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Aye, Crono, it's not as bad as my first attempt xD I put lava flowers as grass detail =o
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Old 08-02-2007, 01:53 AM
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Be nice if there were a couple of tables and bodies of water thats around pond or river size.
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Old 08-02-2007, 07:14 AM
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First attempt at making an outside level.


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It's not terrible for your first attempt. What I try to do, is use pieces that nobody would think of, and turn them into a house desighn. Such as the "wood" surrounding the door. I like the include those pieces into my house desighn, and i've worked on alot of servers =). As for the grass, too much detailing. Try adding more flowers, rocks, and TREES!

But overall for your first level, it's pretty good. My first level was terrible. I actually lied to get my first LAT job so I really didnt know what I was doing, eventually practice and hard work turned into some talent. Im not the best level maker, nor am I in the top 5, but I do think if you include some of my tips, you will make great levels in no time!
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