My first level :P
 

First attempt at making an outside level.
http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/2621/graallh8.th.png

Comments? :O

is it a field house?

I dunno, I just made it D:

lol it looks so.....greeeeeeeeeeeeeeen.!
no...just a tip..try to add some more natural things along with it.
like a bit of trees ..a little river streaming next to the large house.
try to work with paths aswell.

Ah, alright. I'll give it a little addd on tommorow with some of that stuff :o

Lol erm.. what can I say x_x

Detail is kinda overused and extremely random. House thing is ugly.. wtf are those chairs doing lol? Good first attempt I guess :confused:

Keep it up?

LOL that is the coolest level ever and I think if I had a server, I'd make you head LAT. Your judgment is truly awesome and that building is probably the greatest Graal creations in the world. Keep up the good work!

PS I'm serious 100% don't change it a bit, except maybe to add more.

You need to learn how to detail and the basics. Keep practicing, you'll get it.

Ignore her.

We all start somewhere ;) I remember my first level. It was named new6 and It had houses stacked on top of each other with almost no detail.

Dude he's got his own awesome style, why oppress that?

Speaking of first levels, this was my very first outside level from late 2000/early 2001 hehe.

http://forums.graalonline.com/forums...2&d=1076848250

I'm not "oppressing" his stlye.

Thats not even that bad lol >_<

Aye, Crono, it's not as bad as my first attempt xD I put lava flowers as grass detail =o

Be nice if there were a couple of tables and bodies of water thats around pond or river size.

It's not terrible for your first attempt. What I try to do, is use pieces that nobody would think of, and turn them into a house desighn. Such as the "wood" surrounding the door. I like the include those pieces into my house desighn, and i've worked on alot of servers =). As for the grass, too much detailing. Try adding more flowers, rocks, and TREES!

But overall for your first level, it's pretty good. My first level was terrible. I actually lied to get my first LAT job so I really didnt know what I was doing, eventually practice and hard work turned into some talent. Im not the best level maker, nor am I in the top 5, but I do think if you include some of my tips, you will make great levels in no time!