Octopus...[WIP]

[Goboom]

SWIM SWIM!
Colored some lineart from pixelation...
Lineart:

My Color:


C+C please!

[smirt362]

I like him!
Though I think on the bottom of the tentacles you should draw in the suckers.

[Zero Hour]

I love the dithering between colors in the sea - the bubbles. Very nice touch

[SayianOozaru]

I love it.

I like the coloring, and the shading of the octopus .

[Tom]

I love it, rocks my socks.

But i think you should add shines So it gives a little more contrast and character as if its slimey.

I love the background but one thing i notice is the fact you can see where the colours totally stop. It would rock if you added a little dithering there.

I dare not comment on the work of a saint :P

[Androk2]

Originally Posted by Goboom

SWIM SWIM!
Colored some lineart from pixelation...
Lineart:

My Color:


C+C please!

Right off the top, the light part is saded kind of wierd which gives it a very flat look. You are better off shading the bottom of the ehad as well.
Next you shaded the legs directly below the leg in a wierd manner.

You shaded the top but not the bottom. I think it would look better with shading on bottom.

The water lookswierd to be honest. You gotta change it and make the levels wavier and with maybe more dithering? But honestly, just make it wavy, that's the part that bugs me.

Aaaand that's all I got! <3

[Zero Hour]

Originally Posted by Androk2

Right off the top, the light part is saded kind of wierd which gives it a very flat look. You are better off shading the bottom of the ehad as well.
Next you shaded the legs directly below the leg in a wierd manner.

You shaded the top but not the bottom. I think it would look better with shading on bottom.

The water lookswierd to be honest. You gotta change it and make the levels wavier and with maybe more dithering? But honestly, just make it wavy, that's the part that bugs me.

Aaaand that's all I got! <3

I believe it's meant to be stylized.

[Lord Sephiroth]

Sexy as ever Goboom, and I don't just mean that octopus.

I might take that lineart and try it myself if you don't mind, during my time away from these forums i've been doing some PixelJoint tutorials and I think i'm getting better.

[Crono]

NOW THAT IS VERY HOT

caps

[Lord Sephiroth]

I thought I was getting better untill I got like halfway through this and realized I still suck pretty bad. Oh well here's my take.
No background because I got depressed after I made the original colouring.

[Zideruic]

lol my attempt.

no backround because im lazy.

[Androk2]

kind of a rough edit of what I ment x.x I screwd up on the middle leg that sticks out sooo umm ignore that part.

[Edit] The shading on head was bugging me sooo fixed it. middle leg still wrong but I am stumped as to how light hits it x.x

[Goboom]

guys...its a WIP for a reason...

[CidNight1142]

Very creative. I love it.

[SayianOozaru]

I wanna see it when it's done. D: