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Goboom 09-27-2006 09:56 PM

Octopus...[WIP]
 
SWIM SWIM!
Colored some lineart from pixelation...
Lineart:
http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/558...uylinesat1.gif
My Color:
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/8449/octoguycm9.gif

C+C please!

smirt362 09-27-2006 10:04 PM

I like him!
Though I think on the bottom of the tentacles you should draw in the suckers.

Zero Hour 09-27-2006 10:07 PM

I love the dithering between colors in the sea - the bubbles. Very nice touch :)

SayianOozaru 09-27-2006 10:53 PM

I love it. :D

I like the coloring, and the shading of the octopus ^^.

Tom 09-27-2006 11:13 PM

I love it, rocks my socks.

But i think you should add shines :D So it gives a little more contrast and character as if its slimey.

I love the background but one thing i notice is the fact you can see where the colours totally stop. It would rock if you added a little dithering there.

I dare not comment on the work of a saint :P

Androk2 09-27-2006 11:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Goboom (Post 1222981)
SWIM SWIM!
Colored some lineart from pixelation...
Lineart:
http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/558...uylinesat1.gif
My Color:
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/8449/octoguycm9.gif

C+C please!

Right off the top, the light part is saded kind of wierd which gives it a very flat look. You are better off shading the bottom of the ehad as well.
Next you shaded the legs directly below the leg in a wierd manner.

You shaded the top but not the bottom. I think it would look better with shading on bottom.

The water lookswierd to be honest. You gotta change it and make the levels wavier and with maybe more dithering? But honestly, just make it wavy, that's the part that bugs me.

Aaaand that's all I got! <3

Zero Hour 09-28-2006 12:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Androk2 (Post 1223018)
Right off the top, the light part is saded kind of wierd which gives it a very flat look. You are better off shading the bottom of the ehad as well.
Next you shaded the legs directly below the leg in a wierd manner.

You shaded the top but not the bottom. I think it would look better with shading on bottom.

The water lookswierd to be honest. You gotta change it and make the levels wavier and with maybe more dithering? But honestly, just make it wavy, that's the part that bugs me.

Aaaand that's all I got! <3

I believe it's meant to be stylized.

Lord Sephiroth 09-28-2006 01:43 AM

Sexy as ever Goboom, and I don't just mean that octopus. ;)

I might take that lineart and try it myself if you don't mind, during my time away from these forums i've been doing some PixelJoint tutorials and I think i'm getting better.

Crono 09-28-2006 01:45 AM

NOW THAT IS VERY HOT

caps

Lord Sephiroth 09-28-2006 03:47 AM

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I thought I was getting better untill I got like halfway through this and realized I still suck pretty bad. Oh well here's my take. :cry:
No background because I got depressed after I made the original colouring.

Zideruic 09-28-2006 04:24 AM

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a2...ic/octopus.png

lol my attempt.

no backround because im lazy.

Androk2 09-28-2006 06:07 AM

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kind of a rough edit of what I ment x.x I screwd up on the middle leg that sticks out sooo umm ignore that part.

[Edit] The shading on head was bugging me sooo fixed it. middle leg still wrong but I am stumped as to how light hits it x.x

Goboom 09-28-2006 07:05 AM

guys...its a WIP for a reason...

CidNight1142 09-28-2006 07:27 AM

Very creative. I love it.

SayianOozaru 09-28-2006 07:58 AM

I wanna see it when it's done. D:

Mykel 09-28-2006 08:13 AM

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ok i'll try

Magadal 09-28-2006 03:20 PM

I like it, but youll have to improve that water :P

Jackel9 09-28-2006 03:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SayianOozaru (Post 1223202)
I wanna see it when it's done. D:

Same here

Androk2 09-28-2006 08:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Goboom (Post 1223195)
guys...its a WIP for a reason...

You asked me to C&C! YOU ASKED ME TO! Seriously though get on it!

Tom 09-28-2006 08:06 PM

Ahh lol i didnt see the WIP, i feel like a prat for posting. But i hope the small crits i have help :P

Elk 09-28-2006 08:15 PM

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/2...opus166ca1.png

some 15 minutes work o-o
+15 = 30

too bad alot of ppl dont know what WIP means...

Zero Hour 09-28-2006 09:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Elk (Post 1223339)
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/2...opus166ca1.png

some 15 minutes work o-o
+15 = 30

too bad alot of ppl dont know what WIP means...

Cool.

Crono 09-28-2006 09:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Elk (Post 1223339)
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/2...opus166ca1.png

some 15 minutes work o-o
+15 = 30

too bad alot of ppl dont know what WIP means...

Very cool.

Mykel 09-28-2006 09:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Elk (Post 1223339)
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/2...opus166ca1.png

some 15 minutes work o-o
+15 = 30

too bad alot of ppl dont know what WIP means...

Super Cool.

Lord Sephiroth 09-28-2006 11:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Elk (Post 1223339)
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/2...opus166ca1.png

some 15 minutes work o-o
+15 = 30

too bad alot of ppl dont know what WIP means...

Mega Cool.

James 09-29-2006 05:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Elk (Post 1223339)
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/2...opus166ca1.png

some 15 minutes work o-o
+15 = 30

too bad alot of ppl dont know what WIP means...

Psychadelic, even.

SayianOozaru 09-29-2006 05:44 AM

:O Very good, As always Elk. ^^

You should add a background to match it D:

I gave it a try D:

I tried doing the same type of background as the original D:

http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/7176/octokr7.png

Draenin 09-29-2006 06:14 AM

Quote:

some 15 minutes work o-o
+15 = 30

too bad alot of ppl dont know what WIP means...
Kinda looks posterized.

Dan3099 09-29-2006 07:23 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SayianOozaru (Post 1223546)
:O Very good, As always Elk. ^^

You should add a background to match it D:

I gave it a try D:

I tried doing the same type of background as the original D:

http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/7176/octokr7.png

Best one yet in my opinion :cool:

smirt362 09-29-2006 08:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SayianOozaru (Post 1223546)
:O Very good, As always Elk. ^^

You should add a background to match it D:

I gave it a try D:

I tried doing the same type of background as the original D:

http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/7176/octokr7.png

I like that one...it makes his skin look smoothe.

But he needs something....
http://www.pbs.org/wnet/nature/octop...opus_small.jpg
TENTACLE SUCKERS

WanDaMan 09-29-2006 09:08 AM

I like them all :) rofl

Tom 09-29-2006 02:29 PM

I like em all also, but Elks is toot sweet :D

Demisis_P2P 09-30-2006 11:29 AM

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/3...inesat1vs4.png

I'm still trying to get the hang of pixeling. This is my simple red angry octopus.

Zero Hour 09-30-2006 01:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Demisis_P2P (Post 1224095)
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/3...inesat1vs4.png

I'm still trying to get the hang of pixeling. This is my simple red angry octopus.

Nice [:

Crono 09-30-2006 03:25 PM

Damn you all rock, gotta use my leet style for this one day.

killerogue 09-30-2006 07:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Demisis_P2P (Post 1224095)
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/3...inesat1vs4.png

I'm still trying to get the hang of pixeling. This is my simple red angry octopus.

You do swell GFX sir. :D


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