Hippopotamoose

[Goboom]

Lineart by Flaber on PixelJoint
Color by Me
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I am not quite done with the color jobe yet, give me some feedback please.
I used a few more colors than I would have liked to (16 in all), but over all for not pixeling in a while, I think it looks alright.

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[Warcaptain]

never cease to amaze

[haunter]

I like the antlers, but the face is all muddied up, as is the body... It just looks like a big brown, or pink mass.

[Tom]

The colour variation on the parts are a bit bright compared to the base coloured.
Alot of pixel joint users, and myself, use 1 lighting colour, 1 base, 2 shadows, 1 line.

I think your colour of choice on the face really puts off the viewer. The placing of the detailing hatching is well placed, just too bright, or could do with a less bright colour to make it less...harsh?

Id recommend not using the same technique on the face and fur, as they are two different surfaces, and maybe the face area would be smoother and more round

Im trying hard to comment to help you, but i always look up to you :P
On the anchlers choose a light direction, and then remeber what shape they are, to decide the were about of the lights. If you read up, use the colours i recommended you to use, so it doesnt become over detailed.

Also, what's your pixeljoint username ^_^
Hope that lot helps a bit.

[Goboom]

Originally Posted by Tom

The colour variation on the parts are a bit bright compared to the base coloured.
Alot of pixel joint users, and myself, use 1 lighting colour, 1 base, 2 shadows, 1 line.

I think your colour of choice on the face really puts off the viewer. The placing of the detailing hatching is well placed, just too bright, or could do with a less bright colour to make it less...harsh?

Id recommend not using the same technique on the face and fur, as they are two different surfaces, and maybe the face area would be smoother and more round

Im trying hard to comment to help you, but i always look up to you :P
On the anchlers choose a light direction, and then remeber what shape they are, to decide the were about of the lights. If you read up, use the colours i recommended you to use, so it doesnt become over detailed.

Also, what's your pixeljoint username ^_^
Hope that lot helps a bit.

An update is coming soon, possibly as soon as tommarow since I have to work 18 hours today.
Tom, my new username is Emousic on PixelJoint.

[Elk]

15 Minutes work :o

[xAndrewx]

Both are great.

[Elk]

i love you