Hippopotamoose
 

Lineart by Flaber on PixelJoint
Color by Me
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3...rts/hippd1.png ----------> http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/7...tamoose2gh.gif

I am not quite done with the color jobe yet, give me some feedback please.
I used a few more colors than I would have liked to (16 in all), but over all for not pixeling in a while, I think it looks alright.

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I like the antlers, but the face is all muddied up, as is the body... It just looks like a big brown, or pink mass.

The colour variation on the parts are a bit bright compared to the base coloured.
Alot of pixel joint users, and myself, use 1 lighting colour, 1 base, 2 shadows, 1 line.

I think your colour of choice on the face really puts off the viewer. The placing of the detailing hatching is well placed, just too bright, or could do with a less bright colour to make it less...harsh? :)

Id recommend not using the same technique on the face and fur, as they are two different surfaces, and maybe the face area would be smoother and more round :)

Im trying hard to comment to help you, but i always look up to you :P
On the anchlers choose a light direction, and then remeber what shape they are, to decide the were about of the lights. If you read up, use the colours i recommended you to use, so it doesnt become over detailed.

Also, what's your pixeljoint username ^_^
Hope that lot helps a bit.

An update is coming soon, possibly as soon as tommarow since I have to work 18 hours today.
Tom, my new username is Emousic on PixelJoint.

http://img427.imageshack.us/img427/4...aberelk1gz.png

15 Minutes work :o

Both are great.

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