Some more

[Redwizard]

I suppose i feel neglective of the gfx forums as of late. School, girls, and other very important matters like that have occured lately. Oh well. Time i get posting again, yeah?
I suppose the point of this excersize was to see how well my pixel lineart/cell shading is like. Also need to keep practising as i have not done much in a while and may go rusty. This has been made purely in mspaint, using the pixels 96 x 96 for the sole purpose of being my display pic in msn. Feedback :-) thank you all

[Redwizard]

Ok here is an update. i tried to get as close to his face as i possibly could. Will add background and then some aura shining around him maybe

[Gambet]

Nice .sdasdsadaasdp

[Redwizard]

hope you like the finished product.

[Scott]

1. You should remove the black lines within the body outline. Use a darker overlay tone.
2. "This has been made purely in mspaint" Might want to edit that, because people may consider the finished product to have been made in just MSPaint.

[Redwizard]

Yes. i meant to say the lineart and pre shading was made in mspaint. i had to move on to psp 8 for the effects. Thanks for input, scott. have done as much as i could of your recommendations. i agree, it does looka lot better now. i thank you. Zen also gave suggestions on how to improve it, more or less the same as what you had said.

[haro41]

u know they came out with psp 9 recently.. ill have to check it out

[alarid0]

I was about to say the same thing about the lines, too... nice job fixing that

the fight scene you did was alright, but that's just plain cool

[Splke]

The black lines almost look better. Gohan and those other.. guys, have always had very defined spikes.

[Monkeyboy_McGee]

Originally Posted by Splke

The black lines almost look better. Gohan and those other.. guys, have always had very defined spikes.

Yeah needs darker or black outline on the hair.

[Scott]

Originally Posted by Splke

The black lines almost look better. Gohan and those other.. guys, have always had very defined spikes.

Originally Posted by Monkeyboy_McGee

Yeah needs darker or black outline on the hair.

No. Shutup.

Redwizard: The portraits are fine as basic outlines. It lacks contrast and smoothness. Remove the inside black lines, then AA the other stuff to smoothen out the edges.

[Scott]

Quick edit I did of the original one. Didn't bother finishing the arms or clothing, but you have a general idea.

[xxCloudxx]

Originally Posted by Scott

Quick edit I did of the original one. Didn't bother finishing the arms or clothing, but you have a general idea.

Can't see the image..!!

[Scott]

Originally Posted by xxCloudxx

Can't see the image..!!

Seriously? o_O That means you haven't been able to see any of my posts in the community sketch thread?

[osrs]

Nice work, but instead of Gohan make Vegeta, characters with bad sense of humor are always fun.

[Monkeyboy_McGee]

Originally Posted by osrs

Nice work, but instead of Gohan make Vegeta, characters with bad sense of humor are always fun.

Pink shirt $$$$$$

[Redwizard]

vegeta.. with saiyan armor... not yet completed but soon will be. And pink shirt? Oh yeah, you bet ill make him wearing that :-)

[osrs]

Originally Posted by Redwizard

vegeta.. with saiyan armor... not yet completed but soon will be. And pink shirt? Oh yeah, you bet ill make him wearing that :-)

Aye! Now you pixeled a real warrior.

[Redwizard]

ive yet to be happy with it..

[Monkeyboy_McGee]

Originally Posted by Redwizard

vegeta.. with saiyan armor... not yet completed but soon will be. And pink shirt? Oh yeah, you bet ill make him wearing that :-)

Omgs, that's not the cool saiyan armour, that's the crappy immitation stuff that capsule corp make, or something like that.

Omy, wtf, i still know way too much about dbz *shoots himself*

[Redwizard]

well here is an updated gohan

[osrs]

Pretty good, can you draw my avatar? I would like to see.

[Crono]

Love all of them, Scaarub can you draw Crono in that style and let me use it ?

[Monkeyboy_McGee]

Originally Posted by Gerami

Love all of them, Scaarub can you draw Crono in that style and let me use it ?

Ewww, no way, making crono in poopy anime is heretic its game-style or nothing yo

[Crono]

Originally Posted by Monkeyboy_McGee

Ewww, no way, making crono in poopy anime is heretic its game-style or nothing yo

Crono was designed in anime. The creator of DBZ did all the char designing in Chrono Trigger.

[Redwizard]

.. yes anyway heres goku

[Monkeyboy_McGee]

Originally Posted by Gerami

Crono was designed in anime. The creator of DBZ did all the char designing in Chrono Trigger.

Umm...shuttup

[xxCloudxx]

Wow that's awesome. I love the hair.

[Redwizard]

yes scott i see :-) thanks for all your help

[Redwizard]

here is the entire collection including one or two i have not posted

[Zero Hour]

They're good, but I do so detest Dragon Ball Z...

[Nitkizi]

Okay, now make images of Naruto and Full Metal Alchemist characters..

[xxCloudxx]

Could you please post them without the effects?

[Redwizard]

could not find them all without effects, but i have some pre stages, some of them include simple smudges but the only one with full effects is one of gohans. Also majin buu was a recent addition and had only saved one version, and no lineart

[Myomoto]

Hmm... isn't the chest quite big on the first one you did, the blonde guy, no offence but it looks like boobs :_:

[GateSupreme]

red truthfully those gfx own and how you do them effects i dont know but the selections of charchetrs bleh use the bad guys they always are better then goke and gohan i say you should do Raditz or Brolli or Supre 17 anyhow ima try and draw one shade it maybe you can help me out with the ki waves around the guys

[Redwizard]

ok yes will make android 17. Here is lineart

[Redwizard]

here you go gate, finished

[osrs]

Nice, but make my avatar now.

[Splke]

Vegeta is never that scratched. He bleeds easy. Lip, upper right eyebrow, and usually a smudge on a cheek.

Also, try to give him a more defined chin.. kindof a strong one. -shrug-