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Old 05-08-2002, 08:09 AM
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Rate level? ^_^

Ok...this is my first outdoor level....I had one person look at it, and he told me to do things. So I did. Heh. By the way...post what you think :P
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Old 05-08-2002, 08:43 AM
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NEON TREES
Very dark
Niiiiiiiiice.
I see Neon trees alot.. mainly on weekends.
But.. it's Tuesday o.O
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Old 05-08-2002, 09:07 AM
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I dont know why but im not too fond of it. Partially b/c i cant see the leve. post a ss w/o the backpal.
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Old 05-08-2002, 09:15 AM
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for your first lv its pretty good.
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Old 05-08-2002, 02:14 PM
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h8 4 backpals
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Old 05-08-2002, 05:24 PM
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Here's the non-backpal version for everyone to see it clearer.
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Old 05-08-2002, 08:14 PM
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Here's the non-backpal version for everyone to see it clearer.
mmmmkay: Control-NPC Sandpath sucks.
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Old 05-08-2002, 08:31 PM
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Too Dark,I Can't See Crap =p
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Old 05-09-2002, 12:35 AM
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Not bad for first level!
Just try to add detail into grass and not just that ! Use Swamp cut away and swamp! Also if your making it Dark use hardly and NPC's as there always to birght! Finnaly go over parts of path generator where they come out all Straight!
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Old 05-09-2002, 12:39 AM
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Yea pretty decent for your first outdoor level, keep practicing and you'll get better.
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Old 05-09-2002, 04:56 AM
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try to avoid using path generator, but for ur first level, its really good
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Old 05-09-2002, 05:34 AM
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Show me something I can actualy see and I'll rate it.

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oops, didn't see the second post... all I can say:
It looked beter before you removed the backpal
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Old 05-09-2002, 08:53 AM
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its nice

i still dont know howto connect trees bc im dumb

i dont do forest levels
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Old 05-10-2002, 02:52 AM
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If you want them to like overlap the trunks, look for the tile on the left. Its pretty easy once you do it once. ^_^;;
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Old 05-10-2002, 02:56 AM
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If you want them to like overlap the trunks, look for the tile on the left. Its pretty easy once you do it once. ^_^;;
See your a good Level Maker already , You sound like a pro and are helping people! Lol
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Old 05-10-2002, 03:52 AM
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its nice

i still dont know howto connect trees bc im dumb

i dont do forest levels
hi they are easy bye
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Old 05-10-2002, 04:20 AM
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Hmm... It's good... Add more grass patches in that large plot of dirt, add some puddle water... make the path "bumply"... Hmm... add some cut swamp, cut bushes... remove some of the intact bushes as well, maybe add some rocks and rock dirt holes, add some mushrooms, but try to put the tiny 1-tile 'shrooms where they won't get in the way, cuz people can't see them very well and they run into them... hmmm... What else?... use some grass stones (the green ones), use some more varitey (sp) of detailing tiles, not just weeds, flowers, and bushes... @_@ Try those suggestions if you want... use all of them, or just some of them, or you could always flick me off and throw a beer bottle at my head X_X
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Old 05-10-2002, 05:40 AM
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<^>(^_^)<^> *throws beer bottle at head* Ok I'll try some of them. I know I gotta add detail to the path. Mushrooms I dun like...but mmkay. Water is annoying, but I'll add some anywho...
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