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Old 11-12-2003, 03:10 AM
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level, i think...

rate 1-10,hi
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Wtf do you have like a death shaver?
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Old 11-12-2003, 03:30 AM
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Better than alot of levels i've seen. I think the problem might be that everything is far too spread out, try to put your things in clumps, grass near a few bushes, etc... Try to keep your mushrooms near solid objects rather than out in the open, sometimes cliffs or trees work well.
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Old 11-12-2003, 03:38 AM
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i see

thanks for input, im trying to fix detailing now, also, id like to thank eric for his cliff tutorials. wihthout those, id never be abel to do what i do. thanks
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Old 11-12-2003, 09:39 AM
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The cliffs could use some work, the puddle water stuff doesn't mix well either.

Grass detailing is over-doing it. We need to be able to walk.
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Old 11-12-2003, 09:45 AM
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It's a bit cluttered and there's many tile errors.
I like it though. It is a nice level.
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Old 11-12-2003, 11:40 AM
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I too think its a little cluttered.
The cliff are good.. but to me they feel to unatureal. They don't flow. There like 90 degree bends. And a few tile errors.

Yet I think it's really good start to a level.

4.5/10
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Old 11-14-2003, 06:14 AM
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Well bad detail, it also kinda looks like a maze.
Am I the only one that see's it?

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Old 11-14-2003, 06:15 AM
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Well bad detail, it also kinda looks like a maze.
Am I the only one that see's it?

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Simple maze... For simple minds perhaps?...
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Old 11-14-2003, 03:24 PM
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Talking

perhaps!
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Old 11-16-2003, 03:51 AM
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Simple maze... For simple minds perhaps?...

Don't be such an ******* about it, he asked for an opinion. Not an insult.
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Old 11-16-2003, 03:53 AM
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Don't be such an ******* about it, he asked for an opinion. Not an insult.
You need to lighten up... Or settle down... One or the other... I was only joking, geez.
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Old 11-16-2003, 03:55 AM
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Try joking with more enthusiasm
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Old 11-16-2003, 03:56 AM
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Try joking with more enthusiasm
I'd really rather not, but thanks for the advice anyway.
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Old 11-16-2003, 03:58 AM
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Welcome, I would take that suggestion though, It might help you out later in life.
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Old 11-16-2003, 04:48 AM
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Old 11-16-2003, 06:37 AM
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What the hell was the point in posting that?
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Old 11-16-2003, 06:42 AM
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What the hell was the point in posting that?
It's called getting a higher post count.
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Old 11-16-2003, 06:46 AM
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Old 11-16-2003, 06:49 AM
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Okay then
You see, there's this thing called spam, which is basicly posting mundane things, such as you just did... It's not a habit to get into.
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Old 11-16-2003, 06:51 AM
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You see, there's this thing called spam, which is basicly posting mundane things, such as you just did... It's not a habit to get into.
I know, it's starting to piss me off, I want to hit these people with sticks.
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Old 11-16-2003, 07:26 AM
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I know, it's starting to piss me off, I want to hit these people with sticks.
Can I be first!?
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Old 11-16-2003, 07:26 AM
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I think the level would look better with less grass =X
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Old 11-16-2003, 07:30 AM
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I think the level would look better with less grass =X
Hey, you're right... In the lower right corner... Add some dirt or something.
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Old 11-16-2003, 07:47 AM
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Can I be first!?
Not trying to break the forum rules, but I think we'd use a firearm instead of a stick for you.
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Old 11-16-2003, 08:33 AM
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Not trying to break the forum rules, but I think we'd use a firearm instead of a stick for you.
I think he wanted to beat the people with sticks first, not be beat.
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Old 11-16-2003, 04:34 PM
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I think he wanted to beat the people with sticks first, not be beat.
Yeah.. That's it. Glory just to use to jumping to conclusions I guess.
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Old 11-17-2003, 01:52 AM
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Yeah.. That's it. Glory just to use to jumping to conclusions I guess.
Indeed, especially because you've been negative towards me in the past.
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Old 11-17-2003, 01:58 AM
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Indeed, especially because you've been negative towards me in the past.
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Old 11-21-2003, 03:36 AM
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HAHHAHHA SIMPLE MAXZE 4 SIMPLE MINDZ HAHAA LOL MJJK JK ROFL

jk.
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Old 11-29-2003, 01:11 PM
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5/10 I don't like the small trees, the cliffs are to straight, otherwise, it's pretty good
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Old 11-29-2003, 07:43 PM
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I'll chip in my two cents- the cliffs do look a bit unatural- they're too angled, and there are too many indentions for my taste, but hey, what do I know?
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Old 11-30-2003, 12:07 AM
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more like 5 cents -_-
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Old 12-01-2003, 09:13 PM
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6.6743-

could get a higher rating from me, but I feel its too chaotic. The level does not flow well and has random objects placed around the level. I see a few errors also. Good start with the cliffs and water, but you made a mistake by using so many random tiles throughout the rest of the level. This level could be fixed easily.
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