level, i think...
 

rate 1-10,hi

Better than alot of levels i've seen. I think the problem might be that everything is far too spread out, try to put your things in clumps, grass near a few bushes, etc... Try to keep your mushrooms near solid objects rather than out in the open, sometimes cliffs or trees work well.

i see
 

thanks for input, im trying to fix detailing now, also, id like to thank eric for his cliff tutorials. wihthout those, id never be abel to do what i do. thanks

The cliffs could use some work, the puddle water stuff doesn't mix well either.

Grass detailing is over-doing it. We need to be able to walk.

It's a bit cluttered and there's many tile errors.
I like it though. It is a nice level.

I too think its a little cluttered.
The cliff are good.. but to me they feel to unatureal. They don't flow. There like 90 degree bends. And a few tile errors.

Yet I think it's really good start to a level.

4.5/10

Well bad detail, it also kinda looks like a maze. :p
Am I the only one that see's it?

4/10

Simple maze... For simple minds perhaps?... :rolleyes:

perhaps!

Don't be such an ******* about it, he asked for an opinion. Not an insult.

You need to lighten up... Or settle down... One or the other... I was only joking, geez.

Try joking with more enthusiasm

I'd really rather not, but thanks for the advice anyway.

Welcome, I would take that suggestion though, It might help you out later in life. ;)

XD