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Finally A whole level worth my rating...
Anyway, Bird_Bird. Most people have errors, and sometimes what look like errors to you, may be purpously done that way.
Shape:
Not bad, although I think it does sort of repeat its self a bit, but its a nice layout to detail with.
Floor:
The floor around the outside is nice, some bits once again repeat them selves and look a bit boring, but overall its quite nice.
The floor in the middle is cool, some bits I would have done different (red tiles), the way you have like different parts of the floor as different sections (Mud, Floor, Carpet) works nice although it looks a bit crowded.
Objects:
I think you went a bit OTT with the potted plants, I would not have used that many of them, same with the barrels, also there is a barrel image so that you dont have to have that bit on the top which is used to make it look good connected together/walls. Table is okay, although I don't like the corner parts where they are not connected. Finally the red pots look a bit randomly placed and look like they are there for no reason.
Other:
The pillars used to make it look as if the level is raised off the ground is an effective way of making levels, used by alot of people and foten looks good. Also the vines are good, although some bits you should not have put there, such as at the top, amybe keep it to bottom and middle.
Originality:
Its fairly original, and looks effective and would do on most PWs as most dont have intresting inside levels. So nice work.
Sparks Rating: 7.5/10
-Its good although like BB said, errors. Also I feel its crowded and some bits a good, while others are totaly silly. But its good overall. Keep working on levels!
--Haven't done one of them in a while. Everyon either posted horrible levels, or they didn;t post full shots! |
02-12-2003, 08:49 AM
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