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vincentvalentinepk 02-12-2003 08:49 AM

rate this lvl plz
 
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Some background info you need for rating this would be that the level is for a miniture train the travels along the outside ring thing that you can sit on and ride around in a circle. Anyway plz rate it outta 10. thx

-Vincent

magicbud3344 02-12-2003 09:12 AM

verynice i love the style
9/10
it's not fantastic super best level ever so it didn't get the 10 O:

PrinceDark 02-12-2003 09:59 AM

Looks good. 8/10

Birdbird_0 02-12-2003 10:01 AM

Compisition is good
Lots of erros.
Way too many erros.
Oh god please save me from the erros.
7/10

nikoma5000 02-12-2003 08:30 PM

Wow, that looks great! 9/10

Spark910 02-12-2003 09:22 PM

Finally A whole level worth my rating...

Anyway, Bird_Bird. Most people have errors, and sometimes what look like errors to you, may be purpously done that way.

Shape:
Not bad, although I think it does sort of repeat its self a bit, but its a nice layout to detail with.

Floor:
The floor around the outside is nice, some bits once again repeat them selves and look a bit boring, but overall its quite nice.
The floor in the middle is cool, some bits I would have done different (red tiles), the way you have like different parts of the floor as different sections (Mud, Floor, Carpet) works nice although it looks a bit crowded.

Objects:
I think you went a bit OTT with the potted plants, I would not have used that many of them, same with the barrels, also there is a barrel image so that you dont have to have that bit on the top which is used to make it look good connected together/walls. Table is okay, although I don't like the corner parts where they are not connected. Finally the red pots look a bit randomly placed and look like they are there for no reason.

Other:
The pillars used to make it look as if the level is raised off the ground is an effective way of making levels, used by alot of people and foten looks good. Also the vines are good, although some bits you should not have put there, such as at the top, amybe keep it to bottom and middle.

Originality:
Its fairly original, and looks effective and would do on most PWs as most dont have intresting inside levels. So nice work.

Sparks Rating: 7.5/10
-Its good although like BB said, errors. Also I feel its crowded and some bits a good, while others are totaly silly. But its good overall. Keep working on levels!

--Haven't done one of them in a while. Everyon either posted horrible levels, or they didn;t post full shots!

osrs 02-12-2003 09:33 PM

ow,nice review Spark. lolz http://www.tomze.blogger.com.br/wazzup.gif

Rating:6/10
Too many erros.

vincentvalentinepk 02-13-2003 01:52 AM

thx for the input. there are quite a few hours i got going on the level and about 8 at night and when i looke dat the time when i was done it was midnight so i rushed to post it so i could see everyones reviews that had been posted while i was sleeping/at school. i dont post much as you see my registered date and my post limit. lol but im getting back into levels =)

zell12 02-13-2003 02:40 AM

At a quick glance, which I usually do, I can see a few errors and alot of pots and barrels. 6/10

vincentvalentinepk 02-13-2003 06:23 AM

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thx sirs. i did go OTT with the barrels and plants and butterfly baskets. only things i saw that were brownish tha would look good in the level.

magicbud3344 02-13-2003 06:25 AM

well i'll say this replace berrals with NPC ones taht wayyou don't have the brown ugly looking stuff behind it

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Spark910 02-13-2003 09:30 PM

Its the same 64x64 level grid as most levels posted here, how can it be too big. And if you look at what there is in the middle, thats too small.

someweirdperson 03-15-2003 01:25 AM

6/10


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