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Old 08-24-2002, 05:11 AM
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Forest

Although I'm probably the worst level maker alive, could you rate this on a 1-10 scale, 10 being top?

I know I suck.
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Old 08-24-2002, 05:23 AM
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well, i dont think its nearly as bad as you think, but basically, you just need practice. You have a good start, you're using the tileset, now you just hafta practice and expand your ability.
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Old 08-24-2002, 05:47 AM
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Your not as bad as you seem to think, although I'd still rate it around 4.5

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Old 08-24-2002, 06:59 AM
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Your not as bad as you seem to think, although I'd still rate it around 4.5

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the treelayout is nice.. your grass tileing needs work.. err.. 5.0
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Old 08-24-2002, 12:15 PM
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good, good, like Cid_night said , you just hafta practice and expand your ability
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Old 08-24-2002, 12:20 PM
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errm try using a variety of things, don't just use tiles to fill in the lvl, try adding little dirt patches, a small pond somewhere, mabye some of the swamp grass, that kinda stuff

right now i'd say 4.5/10 as well
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Old 08-28-2002, 06:55 PM
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I like it.
6.5/10
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Old 08-28-2002, 10:39 PM
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Sorry, but i dont like the treelay out, nor the tileing... I dont like that treetop gfx sticking out over that stream thingy either.
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Old 08-28-2002, 11:16 PM
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It reminds me of something that would be on classic.
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Old 08-28-2002, 11:35 PM
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The level isn't too bad, just keep working on it.

The grass could use moe detail, in my opinion...
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Old 08-29-2002, 01:13 AM
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Well, 5/10.
The Grass, like I always say, should be clumped (in Groups) and scattered all around the level. Add water/dirt patches, weeds, swamp, flowers, rocks, mushroooms, etc...
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Old 08-29-2002, 01:58 AM
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Okay, thanks for the advice..I'll expand on the level and show it again in a better form(hopefully).
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Old 08-29-2002, 02:41 AM
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And here it is
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Who am I kidding I suck
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Old 08-29-2002, 03:31 AM
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Those new grass to grass tiles almost never look good.

They usually just make the level... look ugly.
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Old 08-29-2002, 06:18 AM
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ok, remove that retarded thing on the small tree, and lighten up with the grass, not so much
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