Another Playerworld project

benpoke103 · #1 06-16-2002, 06:50 PM

Hello, Some of you may know who I am, some may not. I am benpoke103. First Let me introduce myself. I mostly play Shaded Legend for all of my time on graal. I have been playing graal since September 9th of 2001, and now after awile playing graal, I thought it would be cool to start on a PlayerWorld Project

The name of our playerworld is called Insentric.

Here is the basic storyline.
You are a digger, looking for the ancient treasure: Insentric. You are against your rivials searching for the mysterious treasure. You find a map. You also find a scroll that says: "To find the Insentric, you must bring the 4 ancient keys to the island of Kalango to get inside the tomb that holds the treasure. Insentric is capable of..........." *you fall asleep* Then the rivals come and try to burn your map! They copied the scroll and map! You wake up and save the scroll. But, the map is burned in certin places. You continue your search for Insentric. Hoping that you will find it..........

We have a site up, but our Hostee is going to get a new domain and when this happens we will have a different site. Our current link to our site is
http://www.deathcore.com/insentric

I will post here when the new site gets up. Farewell fellow graalians

(Note: I am not the only one working on this project, but the leader. We are in Need of High skilled lats and I am doing tryouts. Send 3 of your best levels to [email protected], along with your AIM (Required), Your age, exp with graal, and staff you currently are, or have been.

Thank You
-benpoke103

ZanderX · #2 06-16-2002, 06:52 PM

I think I already talked to you about this...

Good luck!

benpoke103 · #3 06-16-2002, 06:55 PM

yah we did i just wanna spread the word :P

mastervampire · #4 06-16-2002, 07:42 PM

Screenshots please.

-Brett

benpoke103 · #5 06-16-2002, 07:47 PM

Yes i will be uploading screenshots from time to time. Since its fathers day today im gonna be real busy x-x but ill try to upload some screenshots later on today

benpoke103 · #6 06-16-2002, 08:00 PM

here are some screenshots from our first town kuri.

benpoke103 · #7 06-16-2002, 08:01 PM

and another

benpoke103 · #8 06-16-2002, 08:02 PM

another...........

benpoke103 · #9 06-16-2002, 08:03 PM

almost done........ just one more after this....

mastervampire · #10 06-16-2002, 08:05 PM

Heh, tile erros aplenty. Whats with the 'SSJ' thing, that better not mean what I think it does..

-Brett

benpoke103 · #11 06-16-2002, 08:05 PM

and the last one

mastervampire · #12 06-16-2002, 08:07 PM

Make sure your levels aren't all like this, fix them up before you dare to send it in...

-Brett

benpoke103 · #13 06-16-2002, 08:08 PM

they arent, i didnt make this town to let ya know :P my assistant did, TTTackler. Plus he made this town awile ago, we plan to fix it up later on.

mhermher · #14 06-16-2002, 08:08 PM

archaon:
Original, but not the best. You need to work a bit more on those levels.

warp2ukew · #15 06-16-2002, 08:09 PM

that looks ugleh. you do need lats

mastervampire · #16 06-16-2002, 08:10 PM

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Originally posted by warp2ukew
that looks ugleh. you do need lats

Do you have to be a smartass? He's giving something a go, and what're you doing? Being an ass on Maloria.

-Brett

benpoke103 · #17 06-16-2002, 08:13 PM

We have a lot planned, I am making the second town right now, and the quest is gonna be pretty hard too :P.
What we plan to do is:
Make 13 heart quests
then you can do the 4 key quests to get the Insentric. (As Described in the story)

benpoke103 · #18 06-16-2002, 08:15 PM

I will be working also all day during the summer, I havent been able to do much work lately because of exams and all. School lets out June 19th so I will be working 9hs+ everyday on Insentric.

mastervampire · #19 06-16-2002, 08:16 PM

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Originally posted by benpoke103
We have a lot planned, I am making the second town right now, and the quest is gonna be pretty hard too :P.
What we plan to do is:
Make 13 heart quests
then you can do the 4 key quests to get the Insentric. (As Described in the story)

Thanks for sharing some of ya stuff.

-Brett

benpoke103 · #20 06-16-2002, 08:20 PM

no prob and wait til u guess how old i am lol

benpoke103 · #21 06-16-2002, 08:22 PM

right now im working on a quest that is gonna be like an Adventure game, Like find keys to stuff for rooms. We are going to make all the quests very challenging. Its basically a RPG server with pking, events, and everything a normal server has.

warp2ukew · #22 06-16-2002, 08:31 PM

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Originally posted by benpoke103
no prob and wait til u guess how old i am lol

how old?

benpoke103 · #23 06-16-2002, 08:58 PM

13 :O

G_yoshi · #24 06-16-2002, 11:25 PM

They are nice, but make a new tileset...I'm beginning to see parts of the graal tileset flash before my eyes....hideous

warp2ukew · #25 06-16-2002, 11:37 PM

WHIPENIE4 · #26 06-16-2002, 11:39 PM

This server actually doesn't sound bad, good luck.

benpoke103 · #27 06-16-2002, 11:57 PM

thank you for ur support guys

benpoke103 · #28 06-16-2002, 11:58 PM

TTT made that town a few months ago, now he is much better with levels, well i gotta go to baseballl now so later!

RavenTelvecho · #29 06-17-2002, 12:21 AM

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Originally posted by G_yoshi
They are nice, but make a new tileset...I'm beginning to see parts of the graal tileset flash before my eyes....hideous

is it me or is that grass really bright.. good work!

Goboom · #30 06-17-2002, 12:55 AM

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Originally posted by benpoke103
TTT made that town a few months ago, now he is much better with levels, well i gotta go to baseballl now so later!

If you have baseball how are you going to work 9 hours?....and 9 hours....thats insane...you need a life...and the levels....ICK!(i know they need to be fixed up but right now...they are ICK)
I=Irregular
C=Crummy
K=Killing my Eyes

Brad · #31 06-17-2002, 01:12 AM

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Originally posted by Goboom

If you have baseball how are you going to work 9 hours?....and 9 hours....thats insane...you need a life...and the levels....ICK!(i know they need to be fixed up but right now...they are ICK)
I=Irregular
C=Crummy
K=Killing my Eyes

*******.

Good luck on the server guy.

Petey84 · #32 06-17-2002, 01:36 AM

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Originally posted by Brad

*******.

Good luck on the server guy.

Nishoku:

He's stating his opinion. He could of been less harsh, but when you post about a PW project you're working on you want people's ideas on your work. That's like spoiling a child.. When you see a child doing bad you dont say good work!, You tell them what they need to do to do it right. Now If everyone told this guy, Good luck! Looks nice so far! You'd be lieing, which would eventually lead to the failing of the server. He'd submit thinking his levels are great, because to him they might look great. He needs peoples opionions, not just the good ones.

TheFrozenFiend · #33 06-17-2002, 02:00 AM

The levels are average. But you said you are redoing them so they should turn out good if you spend some time on them.
Dont worry about making the levels amazing though.
Some servers make great levels but spend too much time on them and the other parts of the server end up lacking somewhat.

You want a mix of

-Good levels
-Good original npcs
-Good storyline
-A fair ammount of quests
-One or two other things that you can do (events, jobs or something)

At least you havent come on saying
"This is going to be the best server ever!!!!! We rule!!!"
or
"We have the best level maker and npc scripter in the whole of graal"
or stuff like that.

If you keep working on it then it should turn out quite good.

Fidel Castro · #34 06-17-2002, 02:23 AM

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Originally posted by Petey84

BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH

Uh.. yeah, whatever. You don't tell a child "9 HOURS>! U NEED A LIFE."

Petey84 · #35 06-17-2002, 02:23 AM

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Originally posted by TheFrozenFiend
The levels are average. But you said you are redoing them so they should turn out good if you spend some time on them.
Dont worry about making the levels amazing though.
Some servers make great levels but spend too much time on them and the other parts of the server end up lacking somewhat.

Nishoku:

You said it all. Thats what many do (me being one of "many")

Petey84 · #36 06-17-2002, 02:24 AM

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Originally posted by Fidel Castro
Uh.. yeah, whatever. You don't tell a child "9 HOURS>! U NEED A LIFE."

I would, But I'm a bad father

..
Wait I'm not even a father -_-..

royce · #37 06-17-2002, 04:27 AM

Those screenshots remind me of my first levels. Yes, many years have pasted since then.

benpoke103 · #38 06-17-2002, 06:38 AM

gah i said id work on it 9+ hours a day as an expession not as a true statement :O In other words ill be working real hard to make this server one of the best. Plus I am working on a quest right now that is going to be a puzzle/adventure like through the whole thing. It will be kinda like a RE (Resident Evil) Quest or something like that hehe

Milkdude99 · #39 06-17-2002, 06:58 AM

Ok I will put my 2cents worth in ,
first off I noticed the old wore out "red leaf tile" used everywhere on classic and I believe was one of or the original floor tiles... dump them .... they are bland and ugly and will do nothing for your server but say "hey noob levels" and you certainly don't want that because some of what you have here are in the right direction you want.Next please get rid of the "chickens" they are a illegal gif from Zelda and would be cause for you to be denied by PW Admin... Otherwise you are on the right track so good luck on your server to making it a good one...

thesaiyan · #40 06-17-2002, 07:05 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by G_yoshi
They are nice, but make a new tileset...I'm beginning to see parts of the graal tileset flash before my eyes....hideous

I personally don't really like all the new servers with new tilesets. That's why I don't really like 2k1 or 2k2, because it doesn't really feel much like the graal I am used to. It doesn't really seem to fit the game. but that's my opinion, and I know other people have different ones(I don't want like 30 replies, saying that i'm dumb because i think that)