First level

[psichill]

Originally posted by Xythar
Yes, I'm going to be a hypocritical bastard and post this in the main forum for the sake of more views. I hate myself.

Anyway, I tried my hand at outside levels for the first time today. It isn't finished, but I'm posting a small screen here for some tips and criticisms. It's certainly nothing special, and I borrowed liberally from existing levels, but for a first try, it ain't too shabby. Better than some levels I've seen here, anyway.

Fire away.

omfg I hate people that say

"O SHITE! THIS IS MY FIRST LEVEL! RATE PLEASE"
even know it's probley birdbird on another account saying it or something

But I am sure you have made level before this.
I'm not saying that the level is good because it's not but if you can't take the bad input by people then don't post it.