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[gwFCCtennis]

Originally Posted by Fulg0reSama

If I scratch it, will the paper come off and reveal the chocolate that's under it?

Dumb that one down for me please.

[Fulg0reSama]

Originally Posted by gwFCCtennis

Dumb that one down for me please.

I dislike the shading, it looks like it's been wrapped in tin foil.

[gwFCCtennis]

Originally Posted by Fulg0reSama

I dislike the shading, it looks like it's been wrapped in tin foil.

Ah. I wanted to see if I could make it look better if I made it darker to give it a more evilish type look, but I ended up with a Candy Blade. Hmm. Ill keep messing with the sword until I get a better result.

[Fulg0reSama]

Originally Posted by gwFCCtennis

Ah. I wanted to see if I could make it look better if I made it darker to give it a more evilish type look, but I ended up with a Candy Blade. Hmm. Ill keep messing with the sword until I get a better result.

Your shading color wise makes me think it is a poor attempt at stone, I say move away from it and better use of contrast, probably near flat color instead of making a gradient like you did there.

[gwFCCtennis]

Originally Posted by Fulg0reSama

Your shading color wise makes me think it is a poor attempt at stone, I say move away from it and better use of contrast, probably near flat color instead of making a gradient like you did there.

Any of these what you think would look good (obviously not 4)? If not, I'll redo the hilt with new colors, or just ditch the hilt all together and try a different design for it. The blade part I'm happy with and won't make very major changes to it.

[gwFCCtennis]

Alright, I like the advice, Its helping, however I'm stuck with the hilt design so I'll put that sword on hold for the time being. About to work on a sword that will be for a Wind Spirit type monster, heres the shape off the start, anything I should change before starting?