My Jetpack.

[anubis_wing]

Originally Posted by Unkownsoldier

There really isn't any detail, but I can show you an example of a pretty ok jet pack...
My coloring sucks but I just put it at a different angle than yours. Plus you used a black outline, which is OK but it looks weird. Now There are way to many colors you used sorry if I added some though.


Just an Example.


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That is in no way better.

Ok, first of all the shape is awkward, not sure how it's a jetpack. Shading is fine and dandy but you also have to realise that you need to portray depth in your thing, not just a lightsource.

[Unkownsoldier]

Originally Posted by unkownsoldier

there really isn't any detail, but i can show you an example of a pretty ok jet pack...
My coloring sucks but i just put it at a different angle than yours. Plus you used a black outline, which is ok but it looks weird. Now there are way to many colors you used sorry if i added some though.


Just an example.


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Originally Posted by anubis_wing

that is in no way better.

Ok, first of all the shape is awkward, not sure how it's a jetpack. Shading is fine and dandy but you also have to realise that you need to portray depth in your thing, not just a lightsource.

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