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08-01-2009 06:32 PM

My Jetpack.

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Hey guys, I uhh made a Jetpack. Tell me what you think. Keep in mind im not the best graphic artist. Just trying to get involved in the forums.

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BigBear3

08-01-2009 08:05 PM

I prefer Jimmy Neutron's backpack.

Unkownsoldier

08-01-2009 09:55 PM

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There really isn't any detail, but I can show you an example of a pretty ok jet pack...
My coloring sucks but I just put it at a different angle than yours. Plus you used a black outline, which is OK but it looks weird. Now There are way to many colors you used sorry if I added some though.

Just an Example.

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08-01-2009 10:23 PM

Thanks for being honest.

Unkownsoldier

08-01-2009 10:33 PM

Your welcome, even my version sucks. I am sure of it that there are other versions in the Graal Folder that you might be able to look at like Aeons for example, it might help you see what you can do better.

anubis_wing

08-02-2009 12:40 AM

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Originally Posted by Unkownsoldier (Post 1512350)

That is in no way better.

Ok, first of all the shape is awkward, not sure how it's a jetpack. Shading is fine and dandy but you also have to realise that you need to portray depth in your thing, not just a lightsource.

Unkownsoldier

08-02-2009 01:20 AM

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Originally Posted by unkownsoldier (Post 1512350)

there really isn't any detail, but i can show you an example of a pretty ok jet pack...
My coloring sucks but i just put it at a different angle than yours. Plus you used a black outline, which is ok but it looks weird. Now there are way to many colors you used sorry if i added some though.

Just an example.

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Originally Posted by anubis_wing (Post 1512385)

that is in no way better.

Ok, first of all the shape is awkward, not sure how it's a jetpack. Shading is fine and dandy but you also have to realise that you need to portray depth in your thing, not just a lightsource.

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Trak	08-19-2009 06:24 AM

very basic

Liberated

08-19-2009 09:50 AM

ugh that guy is banned trak

I was like wth, he's back?

Soala

08-19-2009 10:06 PM

lol elite korean hacker wannabe

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