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Old 03-19-2007, 08:21 PM
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Ok, dont take anything I say offensively.. Im just going to be straight up and point out the things that I see wrong with it. Firstly, You havnt chosen a valid light source, you should start by doing that. Second, the hand lacks alot of depth, i see that you're trying to detail it, but it still just has this "flat" feeling to it. I would say give it some round appeal, start with 3 colors, one highlight, one midtone, and one shadow and try to make it look rounded and give it some curves. Dont worry about the detailing of it until you have the natural shapes/curves of the hand down.
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Old 03-19-2007, 09:10 PM
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Ok, dont take anything I say offensively.. Im just going to be straight up and point out the things that I see wrong with it. Firstly, You havnt chosen a valid light source, you should start by doing that. Second, the hand lacks alot of depth, i see that you're trying to detail it, but it still just has this "flat" feeling to it. I would say give it some round appeal, start with 3 colors, one highlight, one midtone, and one shadow and try to make it look rounded and give it some curves. Dont worry about the detailing of it until you have the natural shapes/curves of the hand down.
It has detail, its just not really noticable because he hes to up the contrast a bit.
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Old 03-19-2007, 11:03 PM
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It has detail, its just not really noticable because he hes to up the contrast a bit.
No duh it has detail, maybe if you would've thoroughly read my post, you would've understood what i was trying to tell him. I said dont WORRY about the detail but worry more about the depth/shapes.
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Old 03-20-2007, 12:50 AM
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This one took a bit...made the contrast better thought I'm fairly sure it's too bright in some places it needs to fade to the dark colors...will fix later.
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