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Zideruic 03-18-2007 06:33 AM

Creepy Hand
 
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Suggestions for improvement?

eronix 03-18-2007 07:03 AM

It's on an alright path, could use a wee bit more detail, and make the rotting nails a bit more.. well visible

Other then that, it's a good gfx, definitely keep up the good work.

EDIT: Didn't notice it, theres also two white dots at the bottom, you might want to get rid of those, they clash with the hands almighty power ;(

Tom 03-18-2007 01:25 PM

hm, i think it comes across quite flat, you put shadows in areas that make a really weird shape.

Also if you add some AA to the fingures so they are not so sharp then it might look nicer.

Shouldnt worry about the detail till you have the basic hand form. AS hands are pretty hard, so far thats good :D

killerogue 03-18-2007 06:03 PM

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Originally Posted by Tom (Post 1289950)
hm, i think it comes across quite flat, you put shadows in areas that make a really weird shape.

Also if you add some AA to the fingures so they are not so sharp then it might look nicer.

Shouldnt worry about the detail till you have the basic hand form. AS hands are pretty hard, so far thats good :D


Yes, Exactly what I was going to say...Been on pixelation long enough to give detailed crits eh, Tom?

Yes, so it's not really what Tom it isn't really the shadows that make a weird shape so much as I can clearly tell the way the top section of the hand is bending (I'm double jointed, don't ask) , rather it confuses the other shadows and you need to get them all looking nice together and having one solid lightsource.

Zideruic 03-18-2007 09:20 PM

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Er k..

SayianOozaru 03-18-2007 09:52 PM

The pointer finger shouldn't be anywhere as close to the thumb as it is on your picture. And for some reason, the thumb looks longer than the pointer finger. Also, the shading still doesnt make sence there. D:

Zideruic 03-18-2007 09:57 PM

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It was due to the perspective...

Luda 03-18-2007 10:23 PM

Look at your own hand, see how it's shaped then add pointy nails :D
::EDIT:: Like THIS

smirt362 03-18-2007 10:27 PM

You need to draw the rest of the arm, put a window, and behind the window a little kid in bed with dinner plate eyes....then it would be awesome.

Zideruic 03-19-2007 12:11 AM

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Originally Posted by Luda (Post 1290149)
Look at your own hand, see how it's shaped then add pointy nails :D
::EDIT:: Like THIS

Yeah so if I made an anatomically perfect hand I wouldn't be Zideruic. Besides my hand is creepy enough it doesnt need nails.

Oh and Raelyn claims it's a total failure and I should start again totally.

Crono 03-19-2007 12:48 AM

do a /wrist and i'll give you a 9.5/10

Gambet 03-19-2007 12:57 AM

There is nothing creepy about that. Ugly, yes, but not creepy.

Zideruic 03-19-2007 02:29 AM

Wow...thanks.

Tom 03-19-2007 02:52 AM

bring the knuckles closer, its a bit long which destorys the anatomy.

Zideruic 03-19-2007 03:15 AM

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