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Old 10-14-2010, 05:55 AM
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Rate some junk I made?

Hey guys, I know I haven't been here in a while. I also haven't touched pixel art in a while, I made these two pieces of garbage the other day for a modern/futuristic application.

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Old 10-14-2010, 05:56 AM
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the tube looks like a futuristic pepper shaker to me.
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Old 10-14-2010, 05:57 AM
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the tube looks like a futuristic pepper shaker to me.
Maybe I should add some holes to the lid then. Hah. I thought it looked kind of phallic. Don't worry, it was made at request, I didn't think this stuff up.
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Old 10-14-2010, 06:46 AM
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Are they literally garbage, because the one on the right would be an awesome futuristic trash bin. Don't empty it for days and you can see the trash all mushed together inside of it.
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Old 10-14-2010, 07:32 AM
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Are they literally garbage, because the one on the right would be an awesome futuristic trash bin. Don't empty it for days and you can see the trash all mushed together inside of it.
Heh, they are whatever. The one on the right was supposed to contain some vague energy source I think. It doesn't really matter what they are for I suppose. I just wanted feedback on the shading etc.
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Old 10-14-2010, 07:40 AM
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Put something to better distinguish the domed metal top from the cylindrical metal side on the sci-fi trash bin.
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Old 10-14-2010, 09:34 AM
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They look alright, but the metal texture on the right one looks too busy, you could use way less pixels to get to the same result
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Old 10-14-2010, 12:00 PM
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They look alright, but the metal texture on the right one looks too busy, you could use way less pixels to get to the same result
True, but possibly at the risk of producing banding. Also, I am not really one of those "use as few colors as possible" pixel artists. IMO, if it takes me several shades of grey to get the effect I want, so be it. I will toy with it a bit more later.
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Old 10-14-2010, 07:03 PM
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Man, the graphics forum is so dead. I've never seen it so dead.
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Old 10-14-2010, 11:50 PM
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Old 10-15-2010, 04:39 AM
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Wait, will YOU make me my golden cat head?
A golden version of the black one you are using?
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Old 10-14-2010, 11:56 PM
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dunno if I made it any better or worse but:

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Old 10-15-2010, 04:40 AM
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dunno if I made it any better or worse but:

I'm not really keen on the large blocks of color and the base appears as a gradient. However I have seen this style before, so I guess it depends on application..
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