new gun attempt

[bahamutstevetff]

first veiw, im yet to make an acceptable rifle so this is my best shot

any tips for improvement are welcome but no flaming please

[DuBsTeRmAn]

Wtf? It looks eh, Weird..? I dont see how you would carry it

[Minomato]

Originally Posted by bahamutstevetff

first veiw, im yet to make an acceptable rifle so this is my best shot

any tips for improvement are welcome but no flaming please

It looks like it would be a painful experience to attempt to hold the thing up. Really big-- the handle is bigger than the entire arm sprite, not to mention there being lots of sharp and pointy corners on it.

This is a rifle, right? sorry to say, but it looks like it was taken apart and the innards are exposed. I think you've got to find a way to simplify it or give it a cleaner design.

[bahamutstevetff]

how could i make more more haldle able without tottaly restarting it?

just fyi, its a railgun, its supposed to be large

i suppose id explain my idea, the big handle bit at the back was the clip, you would hold the handle at the top and the little hole just near the plasma storage bit is the trigger , the other arm would be held below the gun.

[Minomato]

Originally Posted by bahamutstevetff

how could i make more more haldle able without tottaly restarting it?

just fyi, its a railgun, its supposed to be large

I thought it was a "rifle," not a cannon.

Take a look at some other gun handles; generally, the handles of the rifle weapons or the bigger, "photon" like guns. They're mostly slanted, short, skinny and they have a specific point that helps the wielder hold the weight of the gun with two hands effectively (one on handle, one under barrel, you get my point, right?) Also, your gun has no stock. You'll need a stock if it's going to have crazy recoil, or you're going to hurt yourself more than the enemy you're shooting at.

[bahamutstevetff]

Originally Posted by Minomato

I thought it was a "rifle," not a cannon.

Take a look at some other gun handles; generally, the handles of the rifle weapons or the bigger, "photon" like guns. They're mostly slanted, short, skinny and they have a specific point that helps the wielder hold the weight of the gun with two hands effectively (one on handle, one under barrel, you get my point, right?) Also, your gun has no stock. You'll need a stock if it's going to have crazy recoil, or you're going to hurt yourself more than the enemy you're shooting at.

okay, did my best to edit it according to your criticism.

[Soala]

Guns are hard to make nowadays.

[RevolutionJS]

It looks like Donald Duck.

[Huwajux]

Originally Posted by bahamutstevetff

okay, did my best to edit it according to your criticism.

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IXI, just make a new attempt... don't work on that.. It's a phail already. Start over at Zero.. And watch your dimensions! A player must be able to hold it (Nor too big, nor too small)

[bahamutstevetff]

Originally Posted by Huwajux

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if its bad, you could give criticism like mino did istead of making silly comments.
i want to improve, not be ridiculed x.x

[Huwajux]

Originally Posted by bahamutstevetff

if its bad, you could give criticism like mino did istead of making silly comments.
i want to improve, not be ridiculed x.x

I admire your attempts, but I did give advice. Start over. You really think a Zone character would be able to carry that beast?

It's a bit strange seeing you make some totally kickass graphics, then making things like this. Start small and think big. Try making cool new grenades or something, they are nice and simple but can provide good practice for you. You might even manage to nail the 'Zone' look like Tsunami has done.

[bahamutstevetff]

Originally Posted by Huwajux

I admire your attempts, but I did give advice. Start over. You really think a Zone character would be able to carry that beast?

It's a bit strange seeing you make some totally kickass graphics, then making things like this. Start small and think big. Try making cool new grenades or something, they are nice and simple but can provide good practice for you. You might even manage to nail the 'Zone' look like Tsunami has done.

i tried to give it a bit more little details, it would be easier if i had other gun graphics on my desktop because i cant download zone on it, would you send me to my email a few different zone weapons? i can use their parameters then to nail the size. thanks