My Graal Character WIP - Page 2

trifle · #16 01-02-2008, 03:35 AM

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Originally Posted by Stephen

The proportions of his facial features are really pretty disturbing.

oh well.. this is the style I want to go with.

Switch · #17 01-02-2008, 04:26 AM

Much better.

Elk · #18 01-02-2008, 04:57 AM

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Originally Posted by Stephen

The proportions of his facial features are really pretty disturbing.

What Stephen is trying to say is, that he looks like an old man or a zombie or a beetles head

trifle · #19 01-02-2008, 05:27 AM

I'd rather hear what Stefpen means then you using his name for what you think.
Besides, I am looking for constructive crits, not just gibberish.

cbk1994 · #20 01-02-2008, 05:30 AM

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Originally Posted by trifle

oh well.. this is the style I want to go with.

It's very nice, except the ear needs some work ... It's too ... straight ... or something.

Stephen · #21 01-02-2008, 12:36 PM

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Originally Posted by trifle

I'd rather hear what Stefpen means then you using his name for what you think.

Actually, he's dead on.

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Originally Posted by trifle

Besides, I am looking for constructive crits, not just gibberish.

I guess if you consider "The proportions of his facial features are really pretty disturbing" gibberish, you either live within the Mensa facility, or a trailer.

Obviously I think the proportion of his facial features (mouth, nose, eyes, & their locations) are off - so much so that I find it disturbing... it really doesn't get anymore clear than that

trifle · #22 01-02-2008, 04:08 PM

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Originally Posted by cbkbud

It's very nice, except the ear needs some work ... It's too ... straight ... or something.

I agree, I will fix it eventually.

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Originally Posted by Stephen

Obviously I think the proportion of his facial features (mouth, nose, eyes, & their locations) are off - so much so that I find it disturbing... it really doesn't get anymore clear than that

Very well, your oppinion. Besides, I thought Elk's post was giberrish, not yours.
And if you look at graal characters, the propotions are very much off. I'm not going for a realistic human here, but an extream.

Stephen · #23 01-02-2008, 05:19 PM

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Originally Posted by trifle

I agree, I will fix it eventually.

Very well, your oppinion. Besides, I thought Elk's post was giberrish, not yours.
And if you look at graal characters, the propotions are very much off. I'm not going for a realistic human here, but an extream.

You ask for criticism, but when you receive you instead justify yourself?

You're not ready for criticism, I'd say.

trifle · #24 01-02-2008, 05:30 PM

I am ready to take the crits if I do something wrong, but if its a matter of taste, it's something else I think. You just don't like the propotions, but I ment it to be that way. If I had drawn shadows wrong or something, I would take it.