new gun attempt

[Minomato]

Originally Posted by bahamutstevetff

first veiw, im yet to make an acceptable rifle so this is my best shot

any tips for improvement are welcome but no flaming please

It looks like it would be a painful experience to attempt to hold the thing up. Really big-- the handle is bigger than the entire arm sprite, not to mention there being lots of sharp and pointy corners on it.

This is a rifle, right? sorry to say, but it looks like it was taken apart and the innards are exposed. I think you've got to find a way to simplify it or give it a cleaner design.