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Old 01-13-2008, 10:03 PM
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I'm wondering right now if I'll regret posting this later. But what the hell. After being nagged to post some of my stuff on the forums I though it about time. Here's a dragon a made a while back.
From what I see, the tail is a problem though. It looks a bit knobbly.

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Old 01-13-2008, 10:12 PM
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I'm wondering right now if I'll regret posting this later. But what the hell. After being nagged to post some of my stuff on the forums I though it about time. Here's a dragon a made a while back.
From what I see, the tail is a problem though. It looks a bit knobbly.

Bring forth the critisim!
Pretty neat i like it
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Old 01-13-2008, 10:26 PM
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Great job, on the body and the wings. Only 2 problems get rid of the pillow shading, and fix the eye on the head, and if you gave the little wing thing thats attached to the head more definition it would be great. Also maybe fix the body lines or w/e they are called, Their suppose to follow the body, not directly vertical.
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Old 01-14-2008, 04:13 AM
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Looks pretty good.
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Old 01-14-2008, 03:57 PM
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I saw this before Fayt ;D I really liked it, but now that I've looked at lots of critique on other pieces, I have several crits for you.
First thing, reduce the color count. If I were you, I would really keep that on pixel level.
Second, fix the pillow shading and the eye. Thats a pretty big minus right now.
And, last but not least, get some texture on the wings and the body of the dragon. Currently, hes rather flat. You tried to apply light, go apply texture.

Edit: You might also want to clean up your lines ;o
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Old 01-14-2008, 06:49 PM
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Yeah, give it some scales. I like the line art though.
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Old 01-14-2008, 10:44 PM
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It is a green form of Ridley. Looks good.
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Old 01-14-2008, 10:46 PM
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Thanks for all the comments.
My shading has always been pretty crap. You know that Crow
Anyway. I've taken on board what you've said and I'll change it when I have some free time.
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