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Gothika 01-13-2008 10:03 PM

Dragon
 
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I'm wondering right now if I'll regret posting this later. But what the hell. After being nagged to post some of my stuff on the forums I though it about time. Here's a dragon a made a while back.
From what I see, the tail is a problem though. It looks a bit knobbly.

Bring forth the critisim!

Xterminator 01-13-2008 10:12 PM

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Originally Posted by Gothika (Post 1369549)
I'm wondering right now if I'll regret posting this later. But what the hell. After being nagged to post some of my stuff on the forums I though it about time. Here's a dragon a made a while back.
From what I see, the tail is a problem though. It looks a bit knobbly.

Bring forth the critisim!

Pretty neat i like it :)

Jeffyy 01-13-2008 10:26 PM

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Great job, on the body and the wings. Only 2 problems get rid of the pillow shading, and fix the eye on the head, and if you gave the little wing thing thats attached to the head more definition it would be great. Also maybe fix the body lines or w/e they are called, Their suppose to follow the body, not directly vertical.

Bp852912 01-14-2008 04:13 AM

Looks pretty good.

Crow 01-14-2008 03:57 PM

I saw this before Fayt ;D I really liked it, but now that I've looked at lots of critique on other pieces, I have several crits for you.
First thing, reduce the color count. If I were you, I would really keep that on pixel level.
Second, fix the pillow shading and the eye. Thats a pretty big minus right now.
And, last but not least, get some texture on the wings and the body of the dragon. Currently, hes rather flat. You tried to apply light, go apply texture.

Edit: You might also want to clean up your lines ;o

Codein 01-14-2008 06:49 PM

Yeah, give it some scales. I like the line art though.

Angel_Light 01-14-2008 10:44 PM

It is a green form of Ridley. :D Looks good.

Gothika 01-14-2008 10:46 PM

Thanks for all the comments.
My shading has always been pretty crap. You know that Crow ;)
Anyway. I've taken on board what you've said and I'll change it when I have some free time.


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