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Old 01-16-2004, 05:46 AM
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The Removed Governor...

::::It is a stormy night on the Crescent Island. The Captain of the Blackguard runs up the dark staircase of the Pirate Fort, carrying a torch in hand. With each foot he takes up the stairs, the intensity of his breath increases. He comes knocking on a large wooden door at the top of the stairs. There is no response. He continues pounding on the door desperately with his might.::::

Blackguard Captain: Sir, are you still in?! I bring urgent information! Please sir, we are in a state of emergency.

::::Finally, the Blackguard Captain places his torch upon a rack on the wall. He then runs his shoulder in the door. The door shows to weaken. He does this again. The door now is almost completely off. The Captain then simply kicks down the door. In the Governor chambers at the top of the Pirate Fort, the Blackguard Captain finds Governor Raghnro Diomora standing by a window, facing out. The Governor sees what seems to be bright yellow spots in the distance. He knows this could only be a crowd carrying torches...a mob. There is no expressed pleasure in his face.::::

Raghnro Diomora: So it has happened...

Blackguard Captain: Milord, we must leave at once! The word has spread throughout the land! The pirates bring rebellion toward you! They come now in large numbers and their intentions are unknown...

Raghnro: Ahh...dirty pirates...they will never learn any means of civilization. We come, we deceive their foolish minds...and now we go? What has happened, my friend...

Captain: Milord, there is no time to ponder the current situation! Your safety is my responsible! We must evacuate the castle immedietly! Lord Rathma would surely have me tortured to death if I were to allow any harm to come to you!

:::Ziro leaves the window and paces around the chamber room.:::

Raghnro: Hmm...do you plan to flee and never fight? We were never ones to flee... The Syntex always somehow managed to fight back...

Captain (sighing): No, however, Lord Ziro... I must say the best course of action we can take now is to escape the pirates before they attack us.

:::The sound of voices is now heard. There must be people nearing pirate fort or entering.:::

Captain: And we must go now! They will be entering the castle soon! Retrieve any possessions you can and let's be off!

Raghnro(Ziro?): Very well...I will take what I can.

:::The Governor begins searching through all the possessions he can in the chambers. Some, he sets in a pile, others he places into a chest for his personal keeping. He then grabs the torch outside the door and sets fire to the possessions in a pile. He begins setting fire to many things around this personal chamber of his.:::

Raghnro (gesturing to the chest): You must carry this with me. We will need it and make use of this.

Captain: Very good plan... let's have this done with then. I have a secret escape route to take to exit the pirate fort. I thought we might be trapped in our own fort one day, so I had our previous architect, Orlando, build an escape. Though I never thought we would need to use it to flee from our own men though.

:::The two men carry the chest down the stairs a few steps. Then, the Blackguard Captain stops on the staircase. He begins to knock on the wall. Then, he draws his sword from his back after knocking around on the wall. He shoves it into the wall and begins taking it apart.:::

Captain: You see, Ziro? Though you may have had all the time a man can ask for to plot your actions carefully, you can always make use of comrades- new or old.

Raghnro(Ziro?): I see...rather than having stone in this part of the wall, you had weak wood put in and disguised it...

:::The two men carry the chest through the hole the Captain produced in the wall. They walk through a path this hole leads to. Finally, they come to a window at the end of the castle which faces the sea.:::

Raghnro (dropping the chest to the ground): What now?

:::The Blackguard Captain shoves the chest into the sea with a few kicks.:::

Captain: It should float just long enough. Jump!

:::The Captain pushes the Governor into the water, several fort-levels below. He then jumps in as well. The two men come afloat for deep breaths. They then harmonically dive back in and retrieve the chest. However, Raghnro falls back into the water and the Captain then does not see where he goes. For a good long while he searches the waters around looking for him. Finally, Raghnro dives back up and appears to be just fine.:::

Raghnro: I apologize for the dissapearance. I simply had to take care of some things first.

Captain: Be carefull! I have a boat not too far out from here. We can swim there. I had the ship master Kerith Jordan produce a ship special for emergencies such as this. It can be sailed easily by just the two of us, yet she is not armed.

:::The two men hear the vulgar pirates climbing the stairs of the pirate fort, cursing and shouting for the Governor. They create a mess in their way, destroying things along the trail to nothing.:::

Captain: Let's be off! They may catch on to our escape...

:::The two men swim off into the north with their precious cargo. After not too long, they come accross a boat. They mange to push the chest onto the boat. They proceed by boarding the boat themselves.:::

Captain: Yarr! Ye foolish pirate won't find our whereabouts now! Yer bound to destroy yerselves in time without the right governing!

Raghnro: Hah hah...Aye! Yer all bound to the same fate! Seaslugs!

:::The Blackguard Captain takes the wheel and the men begin to get the boat sailing to the north.:::

Captain: Ahh...I suppose we can cut this foolish act now. I suppose that means you can remove that ridiculous monocle from your eye as well, Ziro.

Raghnro(Ziro?) (removing his monocle): Ahh...yes. Perhaps now I can also get myself some decent garments to clothe myself with. The world shall never see Raghnro Diomora again.

Captain: That is true! No more act for us! Now there is only Ziro Vitrudestec...

Ziro (removing his boots filled with water): That is fact. No more need to hide who we are...perhaps we should seek out Rathma...

Captain: Maybe one day... but untill then, at least we know the king of the lost kingdom of Armageddon, the lord of war and domination no longer has to play the role of another in a world of people who do not even know of him.

:::The two look off into the distance. They then see the shipyard at the north end of the castle, where Ziro swam into after retrieving the chest, burst into explosive flames. They continue sailing to the North..:::

Ziro Vitrudestec: To the north, my friend...where we will greet our old friends...and take our journey from there. And if that does not work, we will continue north,past the Zormite lands and to unexplored lands. We will reign again...sailing to the north...always, to the north...


(( Removed by force in reality due to treason on part of Captain Misty Di....so then...removed by force in roleplaying. ))
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Old 01-16-2004, 05:59 AM
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i'll give you that i liked your story.
but i had no idea you were the king of armigeddon chaos the 4th atomic bomb man :O
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Old 01-16-2004, 06:12 AM
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i'll give you that i liked your story.
but i had no idea you were the king of armigeddon chaos the 4th atomic bomb man :O
Armageddon: kingdom from a fictional world I created with help of a friend. A story with detail, history, and...k
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Old 01-16-2004, 12:40 PM
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Re: The Removed Governor...

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(( Removed by force in reality due to treason on part of Captain Misty Di....so then...removed by force in roleplaying. ))
Actually i didnt remove you

Good story though
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Old 01-17-2004, 12:19 AM
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Good story
Good idea you didn't head south.
Perhaps i'll join you
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Old 01-17-2004, 02:47 AM
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Maybe I shall too...
The pirates dont seem to like Ogres...
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Old 01-17-2004, 02:58 AM
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Maybe I shall too...
The pirates dont seem to like Ogres...
Ogres are an RPing race, aren't they? Why the hell would a non-RP group care about an RP group of people? Why would a non-RPing person lead an RP group?
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Old 01-17-2004, 03:12 AM
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Re: Re: The Removed Governor...

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Actually i didnt remove you

Good story though
Noone said you removed me. Nor did we ask for your opinion. Don't spam my threads please
And of course it's a good story- I'm Ziro
Of course, it SHOULD sound horrible when you take out peices like this from my complete story. You just have to know quality to understand that though.

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Good story
Good idea you didn't head south.
Perhaps i'll join you
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Maybe I shall too...
The pirates dont seem to like Ogres...
Then let us sail, comrades! And we shall see where our adventures will take us! I am sure we will find some sort of peace of mind wherever we are taken
Cyrin, Crevar, Ziro, and the ogre! And others!

(sorry for double-post)
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Ziro if you can read you said at the end of your orignial post that you were removed in forced by captain misty di, i was just merely pointing out that i didnt remove you, i suggest you know what you are talking about before you make false accusations!!!

Cryin how would you know what the kingdom is like now, anytime i have seen you, its not even been 5 mins you've stayed from what i have seen....everything needs a chance

On the whole ogre thing, the point more was does a pirate group actually have orges? unless you have been watching treasure planet where they have wierd roboty things :P

oh and 1 more thing ziro you said who asked for my opnion...its a forum this is where we come to express our opinion
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Cryin how would you know what the kingdom is like now, anytime i have seen you, its not even been 5 mins you've stayed from what i have seen....everything needs a chance
Grab a dictionary and look up perhaps please. Maybe you'd understand.
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Re: Re: Re: The Removed Governor...

An ogre can totaly fit as a pirate infact anything can...except maybe a fearie or something...ogres are strong and make good guards for treasure and loot and such and are great for raiding enemy ships
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and the ogre!
^_^ alas...names are not needed as I am unique
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Old 01-21-2004, 02:31 AM
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[B]Ziro if you can read you said at the end of your orignial post that you were removed in forced by captain misty di, i was just merely pointing out that i didnt remove you, i suggest you know what you are talking about before you make false accusations!!!

Cryin how would you know what the kingdom is like now, anytime i have seen you, its not even been 5 mins you've stayed from what i have seen....everything needs a chance

On the whole ogre thing, the point more was does a pirate group actually have orges? unless you have been watching treasure planet where they have wierd roboty things :P
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I didn't say you removed me. Let everyone see what I had to deal with in CP which caused people to accuse me of being too hostile....YOU'RE NOT READING MY WORDS THOROUGHLY.

Cyrin knows very well what the kingdom is like now. All us RPers know how GK's RPing is horrible now. When you have two kingdom leaders saying "lol" during RP events events, one leader saying "CP" in RPing because he's probably too lazy to say "Pirates" or "Crescent Pirates" (though "CP" implies usage of English which is not necessarily a language that exists in RPing), one leader who calls people "Dude" in RPing, and a leader who...*trails off*, you're not improving things by putting the "Dude" in power. Learn to RP. RPing should NOT be something that starting to be learned while in power of an RPing group nor WHILE having a good rank in one.

And as for the ogre, noone was making a point about ogres not fitting into the pirates. We only had one ogre, I'm not racist with my RPing, I believe any race can be a pirate...en elf gone bad...a zormite who wants to actually be connected with his watery-heritage....an orc which can be compared to the dirtiness of a pirate who's been at sea working in the cargo hold for months....
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If we aren't going to accuse people, then we shouldn't name specific people when we are making statements of our removal.

I dunno about Cyrin's point of view. All I know is he is fond of seeing his name as the newest poster on every forum for Graal. Sometimes even where his two cents really shouldn't be.

All I can say is, the issue is dead and done. Sarcasm and bitterness aren't going to change anything. I have my own reservations on how things went and am disappointed on both sides of the coin.

Ogre's? Why can't we call them kobolds instead?

Oh, and it was a good story, except for the part where something was pulled completely out of left field. Perhaps if you were merely justifying the reason for Raghnro's removal it would make sense. It was rather odd how suddenly it is revealed that you were using a pseudonym of Raghnro (through poor foreshadowing I might add :-/), and are in a high rank for another mysterious kingdom with a not so mysterious name of the Kingdom of Armageddon.

It does sound odd being ripped out of the heart of your story. It'd be great to see more of your story, perhaps to assist in the development of your RP group. I look forward to seeing more.
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If we aren't going to accuse people, then we shouldn't name specific people when we are making statements of our removal.

I dunno about Cyrin's point of view. All I know is he is fond of seeing his name as the newest poster on every forum for Graal. Sometimes even where his two cents really shouldn't be.

All I can say is, the issue is dead and done. Sarcasm and bitterness aren't going to change anything. I have my own reservations on how things went and am disappointed on both sides of the coin.

Ogre's? Why can't we call them kobolds instead?

Oh, and it was a good story, except for the part where something was pulled completely out of left field. Perhaps if you were merely justifying the reason for Raghnro's removal it would make sense. It was rather odd how suddenly it is revealed that you were using a pseudonym of Raghnro (through poor foreshadowing I might add :-/), and are in a high rank for another mysterious kingdom with a not so mysterious name of the Kingdom of Armageddon.

It does sound odd being ripped out of the heart of your story. It'd be great to see more of your story, perhaps to assist in the development of your RP group. I look forward to seeing more.
We shouldn't name anyone? There's plenty that should be done and shouldn't be done. I always made it a point to worry more about the more valuable things of what should be done.

As for Cyrin's point of view, it's all just far too good to be ignored or dismissed.

And as for my story having something "pulled completely out of left field", I'm sorry you see it that way. Me and my close friends have been RPing for over a year now (on GK...much longer off of GK) with our own consistent story. As for revealing Raghnro as being a non-existent person, it was because since I plan to continue to use the name Ziro Vitrudestec in RPing, or at least not Raghnro Diomora, I may very well still be the same character, but it will explain why Raghnro Diomora will never be seen again Maybe Ziro Vitrudestec will simply continue his life under his real identity, or perhaps he will continue to try to blend in as a native to another country Maybe there's too much fantasy to my story, but at least I explain things and don't RP as a fish one second and somehow become human the next.
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Old 01-21-2004, 02:18 PM
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Why is everybody complaining about/promoting my point of view? I only posted two sentences

(Unless it's the fact you've got that information from other sources, but that's confusing for people.)
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