rate my level

Neglegence2002 · #1 08-01-2002, 02:50 AM

ya rate it from 1/10, dont put like stupid **** that will piss me off, just give me tips on how i can improve it.

Neglegence2002 · #2 08-01-2002, 02:57 AM

forgot to post, sry

AlexH · #3 08-01-2002, 03:00 AM

You should use the tree tiles.
Especially for the top and bottom, the tree tops look like they're floating.

Way to many bushes.
Too many rocks on the sand too.
Put some detail into the water, water rocks, water droplets etc.
Grass detailing inside the trees is good, gives it a classic feel.

haunter · #4 08-01-2002, 03:02 AM

2/10

the level is boring and im not quite sure what it's for...

Why is there a doll sitting there?
Add deep water to the puddle, or some rocks or something.
Don't have those tree tops all over the place with out bottems.

I can't think of anything else right now.

Neglegence2002 · #5 08-01-2002, 03:03 AM

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Originally posted by haunter
2/10

the level is boring and im not quite sure what it's for...

Why is there a doll sitting there?
Add deep water to the puddle, or some rocks or something.
Don't have those tree tops all over the place with out bottems.

I can't think of anything else right now.

opps, forget the doll, i was testin an NPC,

Vegetto_Jr · #6 08-01-2002, 03:14 AM

The major, number one thing that should be pointed out is the tree tops. I dont like the whole concept that they are floating without no bottom, but this would ruin the top row, might need to find another way to redo them.

Next thing i'd like to talk about is the tables. Because i'm viewing this as a screenshot, I can not tell how they are made, but i'm going to say it anyways.
The top chair is too short, which would make it impossible to sit? either that or you can only face on way. Now, to fix this, the table top should be a graphic, so the chair is fitting under the table, if this is the case, then good job.

Now for the castle pillers and lamps.
I don't have a problem with them in general, but the castle floor gets to me.
It seems as though it dosn't really belong, chomped up in small squares and spread in the grass and dirt, not if they are a MUST, i'd advise you to slim down on them, maybe only add four or five blocks, and closer.

Thats pritty much it, apart from a few more touch ups you can add.
The water could use a few designs in it, maybe a rock or two, light beams bouncing off, and two small grass parts in the middle, just to make it seem like a puddle.

For the dirt around the water, in the top right corner it ends, make it a little longer and cover it with a tree top, that'll really help

All in all, i give it a 5/10, i really like the inside, but the tree's need to be fixed, badly.
You went a little overboard with the bushes, but they don't distract the level itself.
Try making different tables, at least change two of them so they all don't look the same.

Thats my advise, bye

Neglegence2002 · #7 08-01-2002, 04:13 AM

oya, do you guys like those bushes? i edited it somewhat, casue i couldnt stand the graal tiles set ones..:o

haunter · #8 08-01-2002, 04:59 AM

They remind me of Maloria's

moochumama · #9 08-01-2002, 05:19 AM

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Originally posted by haunter
They remind me of Maloria's

[COLOR=dark-blue]Because they ARE Malorias

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Neglegence2002 · #10 08-01-2002, 06:17 AM

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Originally posted by moochumama

[COLOR=dark-blue]Because they ARE Malorias [/COLOR]

no there not smart ass, look at malorias tileset and look at my ss, and compare *******

haunter · #11 08-01-2002, 06:52 AM

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Originally posted by moochumama

[COLOR=dark-blue]Because they ARE Malorias [/COLOR]

No they aren't they just look like it.

royce · #12 08-01-2002, 07:22 AM

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Originally posted by Neglegence2002

no there not smart ass, look at malorias tileset and look at my ss, and compare *******

If your going to act like that then you can forget my help.

Neglegence2002 · #13 08-01-2002, 07:30 AM

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Originally posted by royce

If your going to act like that then you can forget my help.

act like what? someone is saying i stole something when i didnt, and it made me mad. it dont bother me if you dont wanna help, if you didnt wanna help then why did u post btw?

Shadow Knight · #14 08-02-2002, 10:12 AM

Evildred144: Actually they are The Old Tempest of Time bushes slightly modifyed but hey im just the guy who godspeed gave the tileset to , dont believe me. Oh wait heres a comparison shot.

Aknts · #15 08-02-2002, 10:14 AM

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Originally posted by Shadow Knight
Evildred144: Actually they are The Old Tempest of Time bushes slightly modifyed but hey im just the guy who godspeed gave the tileset to , dont believe me. Oh wait heres a comparison shot.

its just flipped with different colors but Im the badguy now arent i?

Omg Neg is such a *******..hahah

Kamaeru · #16 08-02-2002, 11:05 AM

omg sky ur dumb

Neglegence2002 · #17 08-02-2002, 11:32 AM

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Originally posted by Shadow Knight
Evildred144: Actually they are The Old Tempest of Time bushes slightly modifyed but hey im just the guy who godspeed gave the tileset to , dont believe me. Oh wait heres a comparison shot.

.......... ya and i have the ToT tileset SAVED in my comp aholes, when i never seen it ****wad, and as for you Spanky, i thought you were a funny kid, but now you a ragin lunitic *******, i post a level on here and what did i get? some replys i liked and got some pointers on, and thx for ppl who did.

spanky your a *****, and deserves to be friggin banished from these fourms.

kthxbye

o, 1 more thing, kameru w/e ur name is, fu this isnt sky read the sig, is the color in red? no, black. i really do hate you spanky, thx for makin another enemy, i cant wait to see you leave, im gunna throw a money party on g2k1

Shadow Knight · #18 08-02-2002, 12:33 PM

Evildred144: For the fact that you just called me and spanky that. I know most can Agree especially konidias and Godspeed because that tilesets been leaked too much THAT STEALING IS NOT COOL and your a immature loser. What was the point in replying with cussing words and foul language. Does this make you cool now? Get a life , im just protecting whats godspeeds and mine ( and the woman who made it )

Neglegence2002 · #19 08-02-2002, 10:40 PM

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Originally posted by Shadow Knight
Evildred144: For the fact that you just called me and spanky that. I know most can Agree especially konidias and Godspeed because that tilesets been leaked too much THAT STEALING IS NOT COOL and your a immature loser. What was the point in replying with cussing words and foul language. Does this make you cool now? Get a life , im just protecting whats godspeeds and mine ( and the woman who made it )

dude man fu and the horse u came on, please leave me alone, i didnt call you spanky, i know who spanky is, and besides i dont even know godspeed, i maybe have touched base with him a few times, but i ever seen there tileset.......

zell12 · #20 08-02-2002, 10:46 PM

Neg go fix your level and come back with a diffrent mood.

Aknts · #21 08-02-2002, 10:49 PM

Dude Neg.. why are you getting mad over the fact that we are right. I wouldn't of called you a ******* b/c I have always liked you but man.. you can't sit there and tell me that, that isn't ToT's bush just changed.. I even circled the spots on your bush identical to ToT's.

Neglegence2002 · #22 08-03-2002, 12:11 PM

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Originally posted by Aknts
Dude Neg.. why are you getting mad over the fact that we are right. I wouldn't of called you a ******* b/c I have always liked you but man.. you can't sit there and tell me that, that isn't ToT's bush just changed.. I even circled the spots on your bush identical to ToT's.

spanky, i swear to god, (and i dont do this if im lying) i did not steal it, i never have seen it before. I would be willing to swear on my best friends grave that i didnt steal that.

MrMatrixaplixi · #23 08-03-2002, 03:48 PM

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Originally posted by AlexH
You should use the tree tiles.
Especially for the top and bottom, the tree tops look like they're floating.
Way to many bushes.
Too many rocks on the sand too.
Put some detail into the water, water rocks, water droplets etc.
Grass detailing inside the trees is good, gives it a classic feel.

I agree with Alex, besides the part about the tree. The trees have a uniqe umpf in the level. I rate this level a six out of ten. First of all the first thing I notice is that there are way too many bushes. Either only have like 2-3 around each tree or have none at all. Second, too many rocks on the sand of your lil big puddle. Third, add more characteristics to the water.

You did ok.... = /

SingleChance · #24 08-03-2002, 04:48 PM

i thought we was suppose to give help to people who need it!
Remember when mmmkaye suxd?or when aknts was a noob?
The elders helped them he is a begginer dosnt mean u have to teach him different.
I seem to carnt remember when mmkay needed help he got it without any **** about stealing.
When he seems to make his levels better he will all he needs to do is add some back round texture.
Thats all u need to say dont ****ing bother changing the subject about him stealing he said rate no critisize are u stupid?
since the level is un done id give it a 5/10.Dudes it will get better i will garente it.
And spanky if he said he didnt steal it he didnt steal it ok?
And thebuses what tot had are slightly darker and they look like screen name's server tot's

its probably a gif or somet
Neg keep updating it untill u think it is completly done im sure it will be done in no time SO STOP TAKING THE PISS OUT OF HIS LEVELS BEFORE GETTING YOUR LEVEL'S SORTED OUT!

¬Wan -MAD BECAUSE OF IGNERANT NOOBS-