Story line, does it make sense?

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The Story

Originally Posted by Zone Story Line

Some time after 2300 A.D:
Time is no longer relevant in days.
Months or years... Only seconds minutes and hours.
The world has been left devastated and almost
entirely devoid of life under the dark shroud
cast forth from the previous war.
Resources are scarce and the general populace was eradicated.
In hope of controlling all strategic aspects of the
world or at least enough to efficiently maintain
their tribe -- drop ships are constantly sending
new blood off to the scorched earth to engage
in brutal combat..., Into an endless war...

Now.. let's investigate.

First off,

Originally Posted by Zone Story Line

drop ships are constantly sending
new blood off to the scorched earth to engage
in brutal combat..., Into an endless war...

They mention the dropship is sending off new blood to fight off the enemies, but the dropship is sending there "blood" to both sides, Sweep Fleet (The allies) and Storm Riders (The enemy).
Think about it.. there sending off there own blood to oppose each other, does that really make sense? There supposed to be fighting off "other" players who don't come from the dropship.

To fix this..
Zone should have 2 "nations" but since it's the future, let's call them Armies.
When you start the game you are randomly placed on a army, you can switch which side you want to be on by paying with gelats.
The 2 "Nations" are Sweep Fleet (Allies - Humans) and Rebellion Army (Enemies - Aliens, Robots, Cyborgs and Humans). When you are placed on either or, you will be warped to your dropship. Both dropships look different, having a different style following there nation name.
(In case your lost, I changed the Storm Riders name to Rebellion Army)
The only map were each army will oppose each other will be on Iricia, every other map will be the same and just place you on the given teams.

Army Points can also be a idea, when you kill someone (ONLY ON IRICIA) a point is given to your team. At the end of the month, the whole army will have a vote on who should get the special prize, it should usually be the player who is the most dedicated to his or hers army.

Tell me what y'a think