A level that i've made.

Vima · #1 06-30-2008, 03:48 PM

No one is posting their levels, so here's one of my new ones.

I'm currently working on Cherry Town ; Cherry's new guildhouse!

Crono · #2 06-30-2008, 05:26 PM

I like your grass path style. You have a unique touch to it and it's visually quite nice. :]

Detail is a bit plain. The house is ugly. You have some errors in your cliffing that can be fixed, just ask if you need help with it it's not problem. Not a fan of the big grass-bush thing on the left.

Overall I'd say 4.5/10 (moderate).

Vima · #3 06-30-2008, 06:05 PM

Woah! That's a little bit harsh.

Where the Cliff and Waterfall comes together, is that where you see the cliff errors?
It's so hard to find anything on pics1.png that would make it look better.

Crono · #4 06-30-2008, 06:25 PM

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Originally Posted by Vima

Woah! That's a little bit harsh.

Nah I'm usually more harsh. I do it so people will improve.

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Where the Cliff and Waterfall comes together, is that where you see the cliff errors?

That but a little bit before too. Do you still work on UN? I can show you on player or you can send me the level and ill show you a step by step on how I fixed the errors.

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It's so hard to find anything on pics1.png that would make it look better.

Pre-defined tiles has more than you think!

grawlgamer · #5 06-30-2008, 06:32 PM

The top window on the house apparently goes all the way through the house?

Banditz · #6 07-01-2008, 12:44 AM

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Originally Posted by Crono

Overall I'd say 4.5/10 (moderate).

What? lol, that level is really good where did that come from?

DustyPorViva · #7 07-01-2008, 12:50 AM

He got it from something called his opinion.

Imperialistic · #8 07-01-2008, 05:10 AM

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Originally Posted by grawlgamer

The top window on the house apparently goes all the way through the house?

What the HELL are you talking about?

kia345 · #9 07-01-2008, 05:48 AM

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Originally Posted by Imperialistic

What the HELL are you talking about?

It looks like you can see the cliff (behind the house) through the window.

Vima · #10 07-01-2008, 10:40 AM

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Originally Posted by kia345

It looks like you can see the cliff (behind the house) through the window.

No, the house isn't wide, it's high!

MrAnonymous_P2P · #11 07-02-2008, 07:29 AM

You think that was harsh for Crono? His usual rating for people is like 2.5

Vima · #12 07-02-2008, 10:39 AM

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Originally Posted by MrAnonymous_P2P

You think that was harsh for Crono? His usual rating for people is like 2.5

Yeah, but those levels usally looks ****, mine doesn't.
I had like a few tile errors and a 'bad' house.

DrakilorP2P · #13 07-02-2008, 11:02 AM

Don't post your stuff in a public location if you're looking for emotional support.

Lest someone'll criticise you in three paragraphs or more.

MrAnonymous_P2P · #14 07-02-2008, 05:51 PM

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Originally Posted by Vima

Yeah, but those levels usally looks ****, mine doesn't.
I had like a few tile errors and a 'bad' house.

If you read his post there were alot of good things he said and the bad things he said were very minor.

If I were to just read his post and not his rating, I would of thought he was giving an 8.5/10. As I see no reason it should be that low and I am sure he doesn't either.

DustyPorViva · #15 07-02-2008, 06:00 PM

It doesn't matter. It is a rating that reflects someones opinion. You're not going to get everyone to like your levels, at least he gave you something to work with to correct and fix up. You see, personally I hate levels like the one you've designed and would rate it even lower... because I just don't like level designing like you have.

Oh, not to mention he rated the level on more than what he wrote about. He probably rates it on overall design, placement of objects, detailing, layout -- none of which he mentioned.