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Old 01-04-2008, 03:25 PM
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Valikorlia Level

Here is a level I made in my spare time. It's just the entrance of a town in a forest. Hope you guys like it. =)
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Old 01-05-2008, 12:04 AM
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I like it good job
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Old 01-05-2008, 12:42 AM
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Paths look a bit big/weird.. not sure if thats a lack of detail on the each near the road or too much because I don't play Val.

Anywhooo other than that I like it.
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Old 01-05-2008, 01:44 AM
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Looks pretty good
I like it alot, then again, just about any level with Val's smexy forest tiles is on my favourites list <3
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Old 01-05-2008, 01:49 AM
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It's hard to go wrong with sexy tiles
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Old 01-05-2008, 03:42 AM
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It's hard to go wrong with sexy tiles
Yup. And that's the problem with Graal, not enough sexy graphics floating around due to a lack of available gfx'ers I guess. Sexy graphics are a good distraction from the fact the level otherwise, in pics1, wouldn't be that great!

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Old 01-05-2008, 02:37 AM
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It'd had been hotter if you'd have used the tiles from Port Wolfe
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Old 01-05-2008, 02:41 AM
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I like it, just seems like there is a lot of dirt there.
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Old 01-05-2008, 06:03 AM
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I'm not a fan of the trees for some reason.
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Old 01-05-2008, 06:44 AM
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I'm not a fan of the trees for some reason.
Yea me neither the tree's look abit wierd..
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Old 01-05-2008, 08:11 AM
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Trees are amazing, you all fail, go cry. now.

The dirt is kind of weird and there seems to be a lot of randomly trees that don't seem to be realistic at all but hey I could just be rambling, I like it overall but it is nothing special, the fort is kinda cool I guess. Work on the path and it will look better. The path could stay though if there is a town connecting to the other side in which case you will have to make us another level with the details of the town.

Now that I look at it more closely as well I do not care for the gate and the fencing either. Get rid of all the different heights of the timber on the gate and it will look much better, also I think it should on be 2 pieces of timber thick, and not like 4 of which I think you have.

Also around the house a couple of the treetops seem to just be randomly hanging over the house, not a big fan of that unless you had the idea that the trees are the house corners, in which case that would be perfectly ok with me. The trees are one on the left and right in the top corners of the house, in the cracks between the fence and the house it doesn't look like a tree tile although I could be mistaken, the graphics are pretty dark.

That looks like it to me, overall a 6/10. I really love the Val tree tiles, I got a job on Val once but never showed up because the old manager hated me, anyways I will stop rambling now.

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Old 01-05-2008, 06:14 AM
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The trees are my favourite part, though
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Old 01-05-2008, 08:11 AM
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the path is WAY too straight.
Rest tis quite ok, gotta see it in pics1 to be sure :P
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Old 01-05-2008, 07:32 PM
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Your rambling, Tree's are never logical, especially not in a forest.
And yeah, most of the things that I saw from Lor in my Graal Life were really good. These trees are probably her best, though.
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Old 01-05-2008, 07:48 PM
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Your rambling, Tree's are never logical, especially not in a forest.
And yeah, most of the things that I saw from Lor in my Graal Life were really good. These trees are probably her best, though.
lol It was 2 in the morning when I typed this. And yes tree's can be logical.
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Old 01-05-2008, 07:54 PM
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Your rambling, Tree's are never logical, especially not in a forest.
Tree's don't just grow out at random, they're always "logical"
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Old 01-05-2008, 08:18 PM
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Trees go where the seeds land. Most of the time that is under the tree, with heavy fruits. Or where the wind takes them, which IS random.
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Old 01-07-2008, 07:07 AM
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I don't find a forest to be logically erected.. unless it's a man-made forest, but heh
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I don't find a forest to be logically erected.. unless it's a man-made forest, but heh
Logical now that I think about it is a bad word, and so is random. Just because a bird drops a seed in the middle of the desert doesn't mean a forest is going to sprout up. Trees go where rain is, and weather patterns are never random.
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Old 01-08-2008, 06:25 AM
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trees look like broccoli, but otherwise, sexy enough to do desireable things o...
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Old 01-08-2008, 04:43 PM
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trees look like broccoli
lmao, I wnat a broccoli forest on val, would be funny
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