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Old 06-10-2006, 03:20 AM
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My first era inside level. Vulcan helped me out quite a bit but I still need some judging and hints.

You know what to do, rate and tell me how to improve it.
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Old 06-10-2006, 06:00 AM
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Now era insides would be ok if they had walls that actually had some sort of detail to them.
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Old 06-10-2006, 06:21 AM
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Can't say I like it. The paths need to be straighter and none of that normal tile random design stuff and the dark and light floor tiles don't mix well like that.

This is my oppinion though and I havent done much with modern tiles i'm just basing off of what i'd not do etc.
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Old 06-10-2006, 07:43 AM
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Don't start working for Era or whatnot. Graal Online is running low on quality developers, don't go squandering your talent on something like that, stick with the good old pics1.png tileset.

As for the level, it is average, you need to work on perspective around the walls (the carpet would technically begin several feet away from the door). Also I dislike how you made the carpet border randomish on the inside but the outside borders are straight. The carpet also looks like it was meant to be used as cement on an outside level. The layout of the house is also a little odd.
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Old 06-10-2006, 02:12 PM
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This any better? The cement like carpet is actually used as inside tiles on era. So meh, it's my first time. :[
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Old 06-10-2006, 05:54 PM
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There are plants in the middle of the floor. That's a safety hazard.

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Old 06-10-2006, 06:27 PM
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I don't use Era tilesets, so I can't rate it, sorry :[
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