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Old 04-10-2005, 08:09 PM
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Well, this is the first level i've made in a long while, it is an onlinestart for an overworld I work on when I get bored.

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I would of made the cliffs more detailed, and less-straight, but I don't know how to do cliffs well.. There are probably some tile errors, mind pointing them out?

I don't really like the house, but I am glad to hear what you guys think.

I might of screwed up connecting tree's, i'm not sure though, If I did please point out.

I don't care if you say it has tile erros, as i'm sure it does. Just tell me where please!

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Old 04-11-2005, 03:07 PM
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not bad I like it
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Old 04-11-2005, 04:50 PM
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8/10

A few tile errors. For example, in the water. (top left of that watery patch on the bottom)
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Old 04-11-2005, 05:40 PM
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Cliff tile errors, and I don't like the dirt--> water transition.

All good in the hood besides that
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Old 04-11-2005, 06:23 PM
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I like that house, just not the upper portion of it (the 'house on top of the house' thing).
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Old 04-12-2005, 01:21 AM
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I like that house, just not the upper portion of it (the 'house on top of the house' thing).
Yeah, I think that is what was bothering me. Couldn't tell until now.. I'll fix after.
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Old 04-12-2005, 02:35 AM
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The only thing i don't like is the path going onto the grass. But other than that, and the clif tile errors, its a very nice level me thinks :-)
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Old 04-12-2005, 03:30 AM
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This house better? I tried not too make it look like 2 houses on top of each other..

<Edit> Damn, forgot to add a chimney... </Edit>
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