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Old 06-01-2004, 02:06 PM
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Well, what can I say? I'm making levels again...

Well this is a guild house (prototype) for the guild 'Vindicate' owned by Thallen.
Well, it's up to him if he want's it in this 'style' throughout the guild house, personally I think it's quite nice, but since it's going to be seen by public i'd gather i'd show ya'll it so you can tell me how to improve, in other words c & c.

This is the first level i've made in along time, inside anways. Well I'm going to finish some levels for DK, so post away what you think of it :]

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Old 06-01-2004, 02:10 PM
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Walls are plain, too much space dont you think?
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Walls are plain, too much space dont you think?
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Old 06-01-2004, 06:03 PM
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Old 06-01-2004, 06:19 PM
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yea, add stuff to the walls..
other than that, good job, and good use of the lava tiles.

oh, and maybe add those lava lamps that are in the classic tileset, with some cool red lighting effects? just an idea...

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Old 06-01-2004, 06:31 PM
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Opps, forgot to rate. 7.5/10

Love your floor style and the lava stuffs.
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Old 06-01-2004, 06:54 PM
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Reminds my Malorian's guild house.
It's cool
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Old 06-01-2004, 09:30 PM
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It's alright... Nothing spectacular, but it looks well made. Good job.
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Old 06-01-2004, 09:45 PM
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I think it looks great. The lava tiling is done really well, it adds something to the room. Only objects I have are with the walls and part of the tiling. The walls are a bit boring, regular ol' castle walls. As for the tiling, it looks nice, aside from the clumps of the red diamond tiles. I think when they are placed across or atop each other, it just looks bad.

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Old 06-02-2004, 12:26 AM
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Old 06-02-2004, 10:50 AM
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I'll get rid of those tiles Thallen, I'll add some lamps too, that'll look nice :]

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Old 06-02-2004, 06:50 PM
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same as Gerami Said.
and I personaly think that water and lava don't realy fit in a inside, espcialy the lava but yeah personal opinion of course
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Old 06-03-2004, 03:23 AM
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The lava waterfalls don't fit right, and I don't like the lava ground too much.
The layout is fine and can be built upon. It just needs some extra detail to catch my eye or others.
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Old 06-03-2004, 07:12 AM
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Walls are a bit boring :P
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