Rate me plz

[Shroomed]

Ive been working very hard on levels ill just post one of them...i know the tile errors on the sides of the cliffs so bear with me. And im trying to figure out how to make the clifftops more detailed..any suggestions?

[Dude6252000]

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[bo0ey]

That looks sorta like a Doomsday level fused with a Rudora level. I am giving you a 7/10 Because:

1. Assuming you tiled the cliffing yourself, it's pretty good however it is a bit straight..
2. The grass could have a bit more detailing, and I don't mean to add more swamp. The swamp could actually be fixed to have less (or no) errors and use the side peices for diagonal swamp tiling.
3. If you truly wanted this to be a show-off level, you would have made it a beach instead of a mountain/water cliffing and add some deep-deep water tiling near the edge, however I'm not sure what you were planning with this level so I can't hold that against you...
4. Trees stained with blood! Maybe normal colored trees would be more sightly
5. The sand path looks a bit generated, probably is.. you should make your own paths and use all different sandpath tiles... Even if it looks like crap, you still have the good feeling of knowing you made it yourself!

I hope this will help you (probably won't)...
Try to be more creative with your levels and you could be great.

Your pal,
Oink

[Androk]

Look through level making tutorials that have been posted here before (Do a search).

That level is horrid. Everything on it is... plain and starnge and... agh... Sorry to be an ass, but you need to learn to do better.

[Shroomed]

Thanks for the comments guys....Ill try and fix all that sutff and resend.