my first *real* level

Azrael528 · #1 07-06-2003, 09:48 PM

this is my first real wholehearted attempt at making a level, so like, rate it and stuff. thanks.

TripleE · #2 07-06-2003, 10:30 PM

Ive seen that whole level somewhere else.
If you made it nice.
8/10

Thallen · #3 07-06-2003, 11:45 PM

Looks great. I dislike how people commonly flood their levels with cliffs though. Either way, I'd give it an 8/10.

TripleE · #4 07-07-2003, 12:25 AM

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Originally posted by Thallen
Looks great. I dislike how people commonly flood their levels with cliffs though. Either way, I'd give it an 8/10.

I actually like cliffs.

Mykel · #5 07-07-2003, 12:50 AM

Your definition must be different than everyone else's about you first real attempt. But nice anyway. 7/10

Azrael528 · #6 07-07-2003, 07:35 AM

Well thank you for ratings, why does everyone say theyve seen it before? maybe my style isn't original enough or something.

anything i could change to make it better or something?

Judge_S · #7 07-07-2003, 08:27 AM

It looks nice, and is also very easy to look at.

As for your comment on originality, it's hard to be original with outside levels, so don't worry about it.

Eric_1337 · #8 07-07-2003, 08:54 AM

3/10

dont like the bumpy grass, makes it way to easy to detail grass and it looks aweful

Crono · #9 07-07-2003, 02:54 PM

I see tile errors that could have been prevented. Look at that one "dirt whole" and it's corners. Two of them have those green blocks placed in them. Too many cliffs, overuse of them makes them ugly. I dont like it when too many "grass over grass" is placed on the level, specialy when they're "straight", I prefer crooked.

6.5/10

protagonist · #10 07-07-2003, 04:48 PM

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Originally posted by Eric_1337
3/10

dont like the bumpy grass, makes it way to easy to detail grass and it looks aweful

Post one of your levels, we could all use a laugh.

6/10

Cliffs are so annoying. I hate cliffs. Not bad other than that, maybe use some different ground tiles.

TripleE · #11 07-08-2003, 01:19 AM

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Originally posted by protagonist

Post one of your levels, we could all use a laugh.

6/10

Cliffs are so annoying. I hate cliffs. Not bad other than that, maybe use some different ground tiles.

Is could actually be considerd one of the best. IF he still ahs the talent he did when Faheria was alive.

Eric_1337 · #12 07-08-2003, 03:18 AM

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Originally posted by TripleE

Is could actually be considerd one of the best. IF he still ahs the talent he did when Faheria was alive.

Thank you =), Dunno if I still do or not...

I'll have to work for someone and find out =p

Aknts · #13 07-08-2003, 07:11 AM

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Originally posted by protagonist

Post one of your levels, we could all use a laugh.

Shut up.

protagonist · #14 07-08-2003, 03:33 PM

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Originally posted by Aknts

Shut up.

He should shut up, it's not exactly encouraging for people's levels to be described as awful.

Eric_1337 · #15 07-08-2003, 03:58 PM

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Originally posted by protagonist

He should shut up, it's not exactly encouraging for people's levels to be described as awful.

i said the bumby grass looks aweful not the level, learn how to read kid.

protagonist · #16 07-08-2003, 04:24 PM

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Originally posted by Eric_1337

i said the bumby grass looks aweful not the level, learn how to read kid.

As I said, you are describing his level with words like awful.

VeX_RaT_Boy · #17 07-08-2003, 04:40 PM

Its Ok...I like it... 6/10...too many cliffs tho!

Eric_1337 · #18 07-08-2003, 09:51 PM

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Originally posted by protagonist

He should shut up, it's not exactly encouraging for people's levels to be described as awful.

this states that I'm calling his level aweful, which I am not.

protagonist · #19 07-09-2003, 01:04 AM

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Originally posted by Eric_1337

this states that I'm calling his level aweful, which I am not.

No, it states you are describing his level as awful.

Tanken · #20 07-09-2003, 07:09 PM

Very nice, I like it! It could use a little less flowers, but other than that, its very nice. I like the house.
8/10

Azrael528 · #21 07-09-2003, 08:13 PM

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Originally posted by protagonist

He should shut up, it's not exactly encouraging for people's levels to be described as awful.

its ok, i dont care how people describe my levels.

Eric_1337 · #22 07-10-2003, 03:43 PM

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Originally posted by protagonist

No, it states you are describing his level as awful.

what are you talking about? How do you get that from me saying that 'the bumpy grass doesn't look good in there', to 'you level is aweful'? Seriously.

CasanovaCanavi · #23 07-10-2003, 05:00 PM

It's a nice level, but there is alot of bumpy grass, too much for my taste.. I really don't see anything wrong with the cliffs.. I think it looks cool. Everything else looks nice to.

8/10