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Originally posted by YoungTwist
Hey i need you gusy to tell me what you think about this level, Its not done but like what do you think of it. The Manager of Gaia *When i was Dev.* Told me, it was a very ugly level and i should be fired. Blah Blah Blah. So i quit Gaia. What do you think?
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So you where fired right? (sorry I just had to say that.
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Alright I'm aware you're not done with the level. But since there is no point in judging an incomplete level I judged it as if it was complete and what you would need to add or change. So please don't get offended if I listed something you where already planning on doing as I have no idea what you where goign to add on with and I'm just helping you out.
Let's start simple.
Sand = No detailing add detailing with all sand tiles and red sandrocks.
Water = No detailing add detailing with all water tiles waves little rocks so forth and so on.
Area around house = Little detailing add detailng.
Grass on Grass = Little detailing add detailing.
House is blah but its livable I suppose although how you have the roof design looks bad. It looks almost completely random.
Cliff is boring having it there makes little sense in my opinion. The water below it I recommend retiling and adding detail. That little triangle thing you did with the circle in it looks bad. Whats the point of those posts? If just for detailing I recommend taking them out as they dont look like a fence or anything other than clutter.
The sand part in the bottom middle looks bad. The whole level you dont switch between different sand tiles. But here you do every 4 tiles, dont do it that often it looks bad.
It's off to an ok start, it shows promise talent wise because you clearly grasp the concepts of how to make a level. Now its just a matter of taste and what looks good vs. what doesnt.
06-23-2003, 06:55 PM
-Look At This Level-
. but another thing is, ant a manager suppose to inspire you. not say his going to fire you? but watever iam Lead dev. and i dont really care about gaia any more.
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