Outside Level

[dorfindel]

Well..rate it 1-10. Took me forever ...hopefully I'll get faster..had to look for a lot of tiles...dunno how good it is.

[TripleE]

Originally posted by dorfindel
Well..rate it 1-10. Took me forever ...hopefully I'll get faster..had to look for a lot of tiles...dunno how good it is.

That's a pretty good level good job. A few tile errors but other than that everything is fine. I thing you should do something creative with the waterfall...maybe different high variations in the waterfall..like one side higher than the other. Make the cliffs more jagged that looks cooler
9/10

[Azrael528]

its a very nice level, some of the other levels people say are "really good" just look stupid and overcrowded but this one looks fine. and like tripleE said mroe jagged cliffs and stuff, and less small rocks and mushrooms those are really annoying because you cant walk over them.

[Kramer]

I like 7/10

[amonrabr]

Originally posted by dorfindel
Well..rate it 1-10. Took me forever ...hopefully I'll get faster..had to look for a lot of tiles...dunno how good it is.

very good, congrats.. 7/8

[zell12]

See up the top-right corner, you should remove one level of the over-lapping grass stuff it looks occward.

[Eric_1337]

Errors in the cliffs
grass detail = ugly
house is un-creative

overall: 5/10

[DarkShadows_Legend]

Nice level. It could use some fixing in some areas, but still very nice.

6/10

[protagonist]

Originally posted by Eric_1337
Errors in the cliffs
grass detail = ugly
house is un-creative

overall: 5/10

Don't worry about Eric, he's an infectious ass.

It's a nice level. 8/10

I prefer a little more detail, but that's just how I like it.

[Amagius]

Wow. I can't classify it under a number, but it's seems to be right in the middle of overcrowded; ugly, and light; under detailed. Agreed, take away one or two rocks, but the shrooms seem ok. The grass on top is a little ugly, so maybe one or no grass layers would be good.

[Kaimetsu]

I don't like the cliffs, and it's overcrowded with detail. The stream, too, is a little strange. The darker tiles force your character to swim, right? But it doesn't look anywhere near deep enough.

[Amagius]

Originally posted by Kaimetsu
I don't like the cliffs, and it's overcrowded with detail. The stream, too, is a little strange. The darker tiles force your character to swim, right? But it doesn't look anywhere near deep enough.

Good point. The river seems a little too little width-wise, considering that I've never seen a water pit go down that steep that fast.

[Eric_1337]

Originally posted by protagonist



Don't worry about Eric, he's an infectious ass.

It's a nice level. 8/10

I prefer a little more detail, but that's just how I like it.

oooo still mad that your level sucks? thats too bad.

[Aknts]

Errors in the cliffs
grass detail = ugly
house is un-creative

overall: 4/10

[protagonist]

Originally posted by Eric_1337


oooo still mad that your level sucks? thats too bad.

I'm not mad, I just accept the fact that you are an infectious ass and you should too.



Aknts is silly.

[Eric_1337]

Originally posted by protagonist


I'm not mad, I just accept the fact that you are an infectious ass and you should too.



Aknts is silly.

lol. I'm an infectious ass because I said your level was crap along with everyone else =/. Great concept.

[Kramer]

sorry for going off topic but...lol...ass

[protagonist]

Originally posted by Eric_1337


lol. I'm an infectious ass because I said your level was crap along with everyone else =/. Great concept.

No, you are just an infectious ass. :o

You don't deserve an explanation.

[draygin]

Ok quick review.

Table with stones around it is hideous needs fixed.
House is bland. (but not overly so)
To many big red rocks, they should be used sparingly.
The yellow dead grass detail looks terrible. I would recommend redoing it, as of now it just doesnt look natural.
Cliff tile placment looks ackward.

rating 6.5/10

[GoZelda]

I like the level, but there's to much stones in the path.