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Old 03-28-2003, 01:39 AM
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Rate it! XD

Rawr, this is a level I was working on; I don't know if i'm going to keep the pathway that I used to the left. And some of the tileing isnt done, including the house and top area of grass. Uhm.. Please please rate it from 1-10, and if you feel like it -- give me some opinions and tips on how to improve >=X.

PS, this level was made for SHOW and to be PLAYED on... So it's not super pretty. :X
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Old 03-28-2003, 04:32 AM
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nice level i give it an 8/10.
i don't really like that path for some reason i dunno why O.o
i think maybe you should add more detail around the edges of the path like long grass or something it just blends into the grass a little too much maybe i dunno. Or maybe i'm just being picky lol
either way the level still looks nice
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Old 03-28-2003, 05:02 AM
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Hehe, thanks. The pathway isn't really supposed to stand out though... :-P
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Old 03-28-2003, 05:58 AM
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Very nice, I like it.

I do not like the path in the top left corner.. puts the levek outta theme a little I think.

Also the green path is good, but around it lacks alot of deatil.

The sand also looks a bit bland.. The sand tiles, like hrm.. each sand tile is like in grouped.. they need to be mixed together a bit more.. (make sense)

Below the cliff looks very nice, well deatiled and blends all together nicely.

7.5/10
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Old 03-28-2003, 06:08 AM
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Also the green path is good, but around it lacks alot of deatil.
YES that's what i thought needed fixing lol
like around the edges of the path there's like barely any detail compared to the rest of the level.....
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Old 04-05-2003, 02:55 PM
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very nice! 7.5 / 10
But there could be more details
and the house could be better too.
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