New level :..:..:

Gangster88 · #1 11-20-2002, 02:32 AM

Hello, heres another level

btw, i stole the water idee from spark911, which
is a great level maker!!

SupermanJR · #2 11-20-2002, 02:55 AM

Screamzy! I'm going to rate you NOT as a beginer. >P
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First thing is First.
Sand-
K, you do know there are more sand parts than that. They can improve your level by great ammounts.
And, your sand is all the same. Theres multiple tiles for little sand parts (Not the rocks, the sand themselves) Look around for em. If you can't find them, open up a new level and use Path Gen' and grab the SAND ( Not Rocks ) from that and seperate them.
Nice rock detailing, not to little, not too much. Good job on that.
Ground Detail-
Yeah, thats fine aside from the little road pieces. Ditch those. Try not to add to many things you can't walk through in your level. Nobody likes an impassable level.
Nice job with the bushes, you have the cut ones next to em aswell. Cool.
Jules-
Two things.
Make them more random.
The grass ontop, make that random aswell, usuing the I'm going attachment to send.
Trees-
Is that a NPC? Lol. Looks good.
But the vines look kind-a odd to me.. Just a perfect green doesn't fit. x.x
Water-
That looks cool.
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Overall rating- 8/10
Nice. >P

Kiluminati · #3 11-20-2002, 03:10 AM

it's all too linear. Make the beach tiles more jagged and random, same with the jules and your dirt pathway. I dislike the vines in the water. Nice grass detailing though.

Maybe stick a house in there somewhere as well.

6/10

Knuckles · #4 11-20-2002, 03:54 AM

I relized you never take full level screenshots =p

Spark910 · #5 11-20-2002, 04:26 AM

Now people will walk in my levels and say ''Ptt.. Seen this before!'' lol. No i don't mind that much. Anyway a rating....

Grass:
Good detail, not too crowded, nice and simple yet effective.

Water:
Good and great. (Thats the idea he took form me =( but oh well)

I cant really rate this much as its not a full level, and ive gtg in a sec. But its all good...

Sparks Rating: 8.5/10

Not bad, add bits to the sand! =)

Here is where he got the idea from....

(Works better in this level, lol)