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Old 10-21-2002, 02:51 AM
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Another "Rate My Level" thread...

It doesn't matter to me if you use a number system or not, but I would be grateful for any tips, etc.

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Old 10-21-2002, 03:00 AM
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First of all... It needs more detail...
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Old 10-21-2002, 03:05 AM
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First of all... It needs more detail...
Omi, yes...and there are useless things that dont make sense, evenly spread out, you can tell they are there to take up room... 1.5/10
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Old 10-21-2002, 03:11 AM
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The gray 'boxes' were meant to be used as lights/lanterns. I see what you mean though, thanks.
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Old 10-21-2002, 03:20 AM
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I think you need to focus on eliminating some tile errors, I spotted some big ones.
Your pretty new to level editing, so just keep making levels and you'll get better as each one is made.
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Old 10-21-2002, 03:27 AM
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Bottom left bit looks like bit of UN, Try not to make things that we have seen. I know at level building start you dont know what to do that much. Well actually you get lots of ideas but it turns out not as you imagined, But if we have seen something before like that bottom left water part then it makes people give you less marks.
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Old 10-21-2002, 09:28 PM
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detailing plz
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Old 10-22-2002, 09:26 AM
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wooooh, this guys cool because he just takes criticism...someone gave him a 1.5/10 and he was like "OOH, thank you for the idea" thats nifty. But yesh...some useless stuff, some tile errors, and much less detailing then what would be nice. Just work on it, let ideas flow, study the tileset, and you'll be makin ubber 1337 lebels in no time.
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Old 10-22-2002, 10:22 AM
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yup

gotta luv that guy =D
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Old 10-23-2002, 02:12 AM
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so true, i know i wudnt have taken it taht well, kudos...
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Old 10-24-2002, 07:43 AM
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Old 10-25-2002, 05:12 AM
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so true, i know i wudnt have taken it taht well, kudos...
especially since you love the **** (chicken I mean... )
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Old 10-25-2002, 10:30 PM
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quite creative , lacks grass detail and some other detail , hmm id say 5.5/10 not bad
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