Opinions

[iroc_2001]

ok..i'm practicing my inside levels because right now i suck at them.
So can you guys take a look at this level and tell me what you think and how to improve it?
Thanks

[Graal2001_LAT]

I really like it, good work. I just think those flames have got to go.
Do not say you suck, don't be so hard on yourself.

[SavantMiles]

only 3 things i would change:
1. the flame gif, in general it looks ugly. maybe use some wierd lighting effect instead
2.the middle house floor tiling you used, some parts of it are to bright and you basically used dark tiles for your floor, so it dosent look right
3. those stands, add some kind of bottom or if you want them on the ground like that you should consider retiling the stands because they dont look right for some reason.

[Timpan3]

I like it ! But the flames doesn't match, and i think you should use something else instead of those gray pillars, these are only my opinions though, great work !

[WanDaMan]

nice get rid off the flames ...o and since its old style type why not use
seteffect 0,0,0,150;
and add some more tiles=)

[haunter]

Originally posted by WanDaMan
nice get rid off the flames ...o and since its old style type why not use
seteffect 0,0,0,150;
and add some more tiles=)

seteffect 0,0,0,150;

is exactly the same as

seteffect 0,0,0,1; ...

[WanDaMan]

o.O
it isnt is it i thought it was darker...

[MysticalDragonP2P]

My Rating

It looks okay, I guess but some things could be better
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-The ground looks a little to premade, like the kitchen floor tiling isnt to amazingly kewl.
-The border that you made looks almost a little too straight and the gray tiling on the boarder could use some spicing up
-The gifs look bad
-Looks really empty

Over-all Score = 6 out of 10
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Suggestions:

I think you should really change the ground tiling (The Kitchen Tiling) It just looks too premade and too plain looking. Also the boarder needs to look more jagged and cut-loose, not like straight and even like. You should also change the gray tiling on the wall, I'd suggest using different gray tiles to give it a more 'detailed' look to it. You should probably add something to the level. Don't just make it an empty level with nothing in it but bad looking graphics x.x! Like make it a NPC shop or something really neat, something that has a purpose of being made.
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Strong Points

The level really looks nice. If you worked on the things I suggested then mmmmkay could be out of a job, and you'd be the TOP dogg around here I can see that you put alot of effort into it and it paid off BIG! Good-Job dude!
-MD

[Timpan3]

Originally posted by MysticalDragonP2P







The level really looks nice. If you worked on the things I suggested then mmmmkay could be out of a job, and you'd be the TOP dogg

Oh my mmmkay, now you better show us something to prove him wrong

[Graal2001_LAT]

Originally posted by Timpan3


Oh my mmmkay, now you better show us something to prove him wrong

I'd rather not make him feel bad.... ;D

[Timpan3]

Originally posted by Graal2001_LAT

I'd rather not make him feel bad.... ;D

Ahahahahahahaha!! You're ruthless!!