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Old 08-18-2002, 08:26 PM
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Rate My Level Please

Thanx to Stanrar for letting me use his account ( this is xXShakakuXx)


Please give me tips or constructive critism on how to improve my level. Rateit from 1-10 also please. Thank you.
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Old 08-18-2002, 09:03 PM
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I guess it's 7/10... But you should really work on that house, it just doesn't look right.
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Old 08-18-2002, 09:15 PM
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I know about the house. I'm working on making a better one, but i'm not the greatest at creating houses lol.
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Old 08-18-2002, 11:46 PM
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xXShakakuXx:

Any more comments/flames/complaints?
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Old 08-19-2002, 02:36 AM
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hmm

not to bad it could use better use of detail and a differnet house
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Old 08-19-2002, 03:09 AM
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Old 08-19-2002, 06:37 AM
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actually i like it very much, the house...bad...the level...good. The edge tiling is good, and i didnt look hard enough to find any tile errors. What I like, is you found a very good way to convert shore walls into beach, thats cool. 7.5/10, would be higher but the house...bleh.
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Old 08-19-2002, 06:52 AM
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Uhm... nifty I guess....

The house just needs an overhaul...
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Old 08-19-2002, 08:47 AM
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Cliff tiling looks strange (the left/right side in the upper part of the level)
House looks strange
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A strange rating for a strange level 0.o
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Old 08-19-2002, 12:05 PM
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Corupt: side cliff tiling is wrong fix it there is a better way to connect cliffs to shorelines but you did good and some of your paths look like they have tiling errors in them but I understand what your were doing so its cool as for the house make it taller make the doorhousethings whatever on top of the house taller and change the tiling everyonce in awhile for the walls make some windows with blackness or something
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Old 08-19-2002, 07:39 PM
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A lot of complaints about the house lol. I know it sucks, I'm going to try to coem up with a better one
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Old 08-20-2002, 01:18 AM
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The level is fine, except you tiled the upper cliffs wrong. There are connecting tiles for it.
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Old 08-30-2002, 06:58 PM
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nice level. 7/10
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Old 08-30-2002, 10:31 PM
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cool only i suggest to put the house more to left up or right up
and make more difrences with the beach tiles
(i still not found the corners of the water / sand parts)

well..... 7/10 i agree !
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