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Torankusu · #1 04-07-2002, 06:09 AM

It's an older level I had. I decided to make more around it, so I have three to finish.

The coast is the only thing I changed that is noticable, but if you haven't seen the older version, here's the new one.

Rate it 1-10 and tell why.

This will probably get ripped, but hey.

*added* The images did not show up, so the tree images at the top left are missing, and you cannot see the tiles. (in second screenshot.)

Torankusu · #2 04-07-2002, 06:10 AM

with light effects.

Correction · #3 04-07-2002, 06:15 AM

10
because i could never do any better

vsignasv · #4 04-07-2002, 06:16 AM

8

Good level over all. Some tiles there that belong on a walkway but you made them almost blend in. The house is nice only it would look more realistic being supported by stilts.

The shore hs to mant peninsula thingers.

Torankusu · #5 04-07-2002, 06:17 AM

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Originally posted by vsignasv

The shore hs to mant peninsula thingers.

ouch. i see that.

I was in a hurry because i wanted to post a level. :[

AlexH · #6 04-07-2002, 06:18 AM

Its ok.
The top bits nice (besides that bit top left but you said that).
The rivers a little straight though, try making it meander more.
The wat is a little plain.
Try adding some more waves and a few rocks into it.

BARGAD · #7 04-07-2002, 06:37 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Torankusu
It's an older level I had. I decided to make more around it, so I have three to finish.

The coast is the only thing I changed that is noticable, but if you haven't seen the older version, here's the new one.

Rate it 1-10 and tell why.

This will probably get ripped, but hey.

*added* The images did not show up, so the tree images at the top left are missing, and you cannot see the tiles. (in second screenshot.)

I would say somewhere between 7 - 8 depending how hard I would judge it

The light effetcs looks really nice... otherwise it is like to straight pathways, waters, a bit to undetailed water, the sand at the bottom should use a bit more variety of tiles and also add a bit more grass there maybe?!

Well... good work ^_^

Psyker · #8 04-07-2002, 07:09 AM

torankusu. finish the bottom.

Torankusu · #9 04-07-2002, 12:58 PM

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Originally posted by Psyker
torankusu. finish the bottom.

i hate those tiles.

Slaktmaster · #10 04-07-2002, 07:56 PM

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Originally posted by Torankusu
i hate those tiles.

TORANKUSU, THERE IS A BIG TILE ERROR IN THE TOP LEFT
Other than that it's really nice, I'll give it a 7.5!

Edit:
Looks like you fixed it in the second screenshot, <3.

Torankusu · #11 04-08-2002, 02:24 AM

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Originally posted by Slaktmaster

TORANKUSU, THERE IS A BIG TILE ERROR IN THE TOP LEFT
Other than that it's really nice, I'll give it a 7.5!

Edit:
Looks like you fixed it in the second screenshot, <3.

hey check the "added" part of my first post. :[

alt1 = no images.

Correction · #12 04-08-2002, 03:37 AM

i got a cookie

Psyker · #13 04-08-2002, 04:44 AM

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Originally posted by Torankusu
i hate those tiles.

those tiles rule. i love those tiles!

Torankusu · #14 04-26-2002, 08:44 AM

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Originally posted by Psyker

those tiles rule. i love those tiles!

they confuse me.
I don't like using them.

draygin · #15 04-26-2002, 08:19 PM

Gotta change the sand up. What I like to do to give it a natural feel is take the sand tile next to the one you use set it as the entire ground. Then take the sand tile that you used and just go anal dragging it around every which way over the sand tile that is set as the main one. It gives it a natural look. Then after you have a nice mixture go in and add the little rocks. After that go in and add the big rocks but not as thick as the little rocks.

Maybe thats a little confusing but it works for me.

iniquitus · #16 04-26-2002, 08:55 PM

Work on the grass a bit, especialy in the bottem part. Right now it doesn't look realistic because there's 3-4 tiles used to decorate the grass and they are too evenly distribuited.

River is too straight.

Underneith of your house looks like it was just put there, I don't know how to improve it using the current tileset though. But you might try using the tiles for the horizontial bridge where it meets the water.

Nice Ladder (sp?)

Trees in upper left have been chopped off.

Maybe add some watter puddles on the bottem shore line would add some spice.

Maybe adding another pice of land that connects to the northern shoreline but not as elevarted, (eg, same hight as house platform) with stairs, a table or place to sit, and some fencing, kinda like a place to sit and watch people go by

Overall, Very nice work, It's ready to go online IMHO; I give it an 8/10

scottman5587 · #17 04-27-2002, 02:59 AM

draygin · #18 04-27-2002, 03:28 AM

Also I agree with the other guys the top part of the river is all up and down but the bottom is pretty much straight across neesd actualy zig zags in it.

Torankusu · #19 04-27-2002, 06:38 AM

the house.

Are you people graphically challenged? I thought it was rather obvious that the shading meant that THE STAKES (TILES) were supporting the house.