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Old 02-17-2002, 01:45 AM
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Question Rate my level

Ok tell me what i need to add to this level and rate it for me please
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Old 02-17-2002, 03:49 AM
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Old 02-17-2002, 04:04 AM
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Anything marked in blue, should be edited or removed:
- The deep water in a puddle should be removed
- The half grass tiles look ugly
- The Other thing should be removed cause of the grass on the corners, make a gfx of it and make the grass to black or something
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Old 02-17-2002, 04:06 AM
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Deep water is the thing you need to fix up the most.
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Old 02-17-2002, 07:46 AM
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It should be removed, its a puddle... not a small ocean
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Old 02-17-2002, 02:54 PM
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Is this any better
BTW the weird object inside the tree hangout is a lamp =\
Other then that how do u guys rate it 0?
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Old 02-17-2002, 03:46 PM
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Take a look at the bottom of the level, Where the path it, Theres about 6 tiles missing,
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Old 02-17-2002, 04:10 PM
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*Shrugs*

What do u mean that there are 6 tiles missing? Im so confused lolz
Please explain urself
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Old 02-17-2002, 05:32 PM
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That is a nice level but as others have said it does have a few tiling errors

id rate it about 6.5/10
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Old 02-18-2002, 12:29 AM
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Ugh, i dont like that level.
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Old 02-18-2002, 01:22 AM
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mmmmkay: Appears to me that you used some Control-NPC, try tiling some water/paths yourself. 4/10
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Old 02-18-2002, 01:28 AM
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mmmmkay: Appears to me that you used some Control-NPC, try tiling some water/paths yourself. 4/10
maybe he actually took the time to make those control-npcs himself and therefore shouldn't have a change in points either way

besides, we aren't judging on method, we are judging on the final result
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Old 02-18-2002, 01:37 AM
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maybe he actually took the time to make those control-npcs himself and therefore shouldn't have a change in points either way

besides, we aren't judging on method, we are judging on the final result
He didn't make those Control-NPCs himself, and I think it makes paths look ugly. Yea, the overall result is a 4/10.
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Old 02-18-2002, 02:08 AM
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What else should i work on?
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Old 02-18-2002, 05:20 AM
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the water on the path, its too straight, and also, that big squire chunk or Grass on the path
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