another level

Twilikari · #1 12-31-2010, 08:58 PM

I took what you guys said, and tried to use it in the making of an island.

again, any tips or critisism welcome

Soala · #2 12-31-2010, 09:12 PM

you used the wrong tiles for the cliffs (sides)

EDIT: You know you can post everything in one same thread, right?

Supaman771 · #3 12-31-2010, 09:15 PM

Its all 3 colors... brown, green, and blue. And theres really no texture at all, the tree is plain, the water is flat, the grass is flat, the roof is flat. Also the windows look like a totally different wood than the rest of the house and look out of place.

There are all mostly tile problems, not level problems though. In the level, the cliff sides look wrong and it seems to be just a random house on a mountain with no purpose.

Twilikari · #4 12-31-2010, 09:39 PM

Okay thanks

And I think I'll do that Soala...
Now I'm gonna make a pics1.png level, see if it's any better

King homer daStupid · #5 01-01-2011, 04:41 PM

The grassy areas look a bit empty, perhaps make a sand path leading from the house to the cliff edge?

fowlplay4 · #6 01-01-2011, 10:02 PM

thththE Cliffsfsfs SUCK!
dedeeetailing is awfuullllll!

Twilikari · #7 01-02-2011, 11:16 PM

I was gonna upload some pics1.png levels, but I forgot...

Anyone want me too?

MattKan · #8 01-03-2011, 01:42 AM

sure why not

Twilikari · #9 01-03-2011, 04:02 AM

I'll work on it tomorrow

In the mean time, we fixed up the island. I like it more.

Fulg0reSama · #10 01-03-2011, 04:39 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by fowlplay4

thththE Cliffsfsfs SUCK!
dedeeetailing is awfuullllll!

You seem like a certain south park character right now.

DustyPorViva · #11 01-03-2011, 04:41 AM

I think you're relying too much on the same decorations to fill too much space. You pretty much have nothing but a huge green field filled with nothing but mushrooms and flowers. It doesn't look natural. I don't know if this is a problem with your tileset or with your methods. I would like to see what you're capable of with default pics1, or some more complete variation before I say more about your techniques.

Twilikari · #12 01-03-2011, 05:55 AM

Well-

i'm honestly not sure of myself on this one. don't bad-mouth the path, I lazied out and decided to use the path generator NPC

~~EDIT
Just realized a few more details I could've done too make it better.

RegretZ · #13 01-03-2011, 02:42 PM

You need to use edges more. Layer your grass, it looks flat and unrealistic.

WhiteDragon · #14 01-03-2011, 07:20 PM

Needs a vocal point. Maybe more importantly, needs a purpose. I suppose the vocal point would follow from that.

fowlplay4 · #15 01-03-2011, 07:26 PM

Go beyond a single level canvas and make a small GMAP (2x2), perhaps a town setting or an accessible house on top of a mountain with paths leading up to it.