First Level in a while

xmann · #1 10-09-2009, 08:33 PM

Hello! I have been working on a litte grave yard project. Just want some thoughts and I guess some criticism since I know it'll be on it's way.
Thanks for the Input. Any suggestions feel free!

Tigairius · #2 10-09-2009, 10:03 PM

It's not bad for a simple level, I think the gravestones should fluctuate between Y by about 1-2 tiles each. Also might want to do something a little more creative, like use the middle of the snow gravestone in the middle of some of those gravestones so they're not all the same.

DustyPorViva · #3 10-09-2009, 10:09 PM

alt+1

xmann · #4 10-09-2009, 10:53 PM

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Originally Posted by Tigairius

It's not bad for a simple level, I think the gravestones should fluctuate between Y by about 1-2 tiles each. Also might want to do something a little more creative, like use the middle of the snow gravestone in the middle of some of those gravestones so they're not all the same.

I was doing that for a few specail Graves in the next level, but I think I can come up with something else for them i guess.

Rice2k · #5 10-28-2009, 06:13 PM

That's more old school (1999) than what people are looking for on servers. but for simple yea it's nice as tig said.

pokeSMOT · #6 10-29-2009, 10:51 PM

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Originally Posted by Rice2k

That's more old school (1999) than what people are looking for on servers. but for simple yea it's nice as tig said.

Yes, most certainly, he is in throwback-mode.

Vega001 · #7 11-14-2009, 11:24 PM

You have a lot of empty space. You can occupy this space by increasing the grave area, adding more trees, or adding swamp grass, water, or dirt.

As a single level, the level is unbalanced because of the trees on the left and top of the level. If you were linking this level to others, it might not be a problem (particularly on the right side of the level). As a stand-alone level, you may want to consider adding trees to the right side of the level.

Tigairius's suggestion of varying the placement of the graves is an excellent one. I would also recommend spacing them out (at least vertically) a bit more to provide more space and ease of movement for players.

Lastly, I would recommend you shrink the top middle portion of the roof of your building by one tile horizontally from the right in order for it to line up with the rest of the roof and building.